Sequestered
Never forget that life is a continuum...48 total reviews
Comment from Sally Law
Alas, this is a deep one. We will be able to spy eternity once we have shed our mortal bodies which confine us. The Bible says, "For now we see only a reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known." A wonderful hope for the Christian.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally XOs.....
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Alas, this is a deep one. We will be able to spy eternity once we have shed our mortal bodies which confine us. The Bible says, "For now we see only a reflection as in a mirror; then we shall see face to face. Now I know in part; then I shall know fully, even as I am fully known." A wonderful hope for the Christian.
Sending you my best today as always and best wishes for the contest,
Sally XOs.....
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Ya gotta watch the nutty blonde... she digs waaaay below the surface sometimes... ;) :) :) (wink, wink) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, yeah? ;) Thanx for the review, Lady Sal, and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written twenty-word poem about searching to find forever's key. It seems just out of reach. It seems only childlike people will find the gate to enter heaven.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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A very well-written twenty-word poem about searching to find forever's key. It seems just out of reach. It seems only childlike people will find the gate to enter heaven.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Sandra!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Pam (respa)
-That is quite an image
and good presentation, Yvette.
-You have used your 20 words well.
-A good topic, imagery,and rhyme.
-A good contrast between the
sets of lines-seeing eternity
but it was "out of reach."
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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-That is quite an image
and good presentation, Yvette.
-You have used your 20 words well.
-A good topic, imagery,and rhyme.
-A good contrast between the
sets of lines-seeing eternity
but it was "out of reach."
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much, Pam!! ;) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
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You are welcome, Yvette, and I agree about 20 words. Having been an English major, that is nothing! You have a good week ahead, too.
Comment from Sandra Leon-Gonzalez
This is so beautiful and the picture is a perfect compliment. As always your pieces lift me to a higher mode of perception where my imagination is free to dance. Thank you so much for your work my friend.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is so beautiful and the picture is a perfect compliment. As always your pieces lift me to a higher mode of perception where my imagination is free to dance. Thank you so much for your work my friend.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Hey, hey -- so glad to have you dancing, my lady, and as the great Werner Von Braun said, "don't hang up your dancing slippers!" (wink, wink) :) :) Ya know, twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the wonderful review and have a spectacular week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from trimple
Good morning to you, Yvette
A most thoughtful write with a rather busy picture to accomodate.
When we are little, the world does feel eternal and full of magical promise, but alas, that forever feeling ebbs away the older we get and we realise there are no piles of gold at the end of a pretty rainbow...
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Good morning to you, Yvette
A most thoughtful write with a rather busy picture to accomodate.
When we are little, the world does feel eternal and full of magical promise, but alas, that forever feeling ebbs away the older we get and we realise there are no piles of gold at the end of a pretty rainbow...
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Not even one damn gold coin sometimes, yeah? (wink, wink) :) :) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is such a sweet ride to Heaven and your presentation is so pleasing and divine Yvette, you made me unafraid and peaceful here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is such a sweet ride to Heaven and your presentation is so pleasing and divine Yvette, you made me unafraid and peaceful here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Dolly! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Sequestered", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both, read and review this talented poet's work. This delightfully descriptive piece, was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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"Sequestered", is short, succinct, and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to both, read and review this talented poet's work. This delightfully descriptive piece, was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Duchess! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Yvette,
nerds of the world unite! I just KNEW we were related!!!! I'm better with words, but numbers have that certain zing. I hope you have a wonderful week too.
God bless, take care, and keep safe!
the Duchess
Comment from lyenochka
Mystical, magical and imaginative! Enjoyed your ethereal collection of words that form this twenty word poem. It fits well with the books you're writing. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Mystical, magical and imaginative! Enjoyed your ethereal collection of words that form this twenty word poem. It fits well with the books you're writing. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Helen! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose (wink, wink)... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Minglement
Sadly, no sixers left for this lovely entry for the four Line Poem contest - as always, beautiful presentation. I loved the feel of this, your words and flowing lines echoing the gorgeous artwork. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Sadly, no sixers left for this lovely entry for the four Line Poem contest - as always, beautiful presentation. I loved the feel of this, your words and flowing lines echoing the gorgeous artwork. Well done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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No sixer necessary, my Lady Marcia, but the fact that you wish for one means a lot - thank you!! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
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LOL - me too. Well done.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
You have made excellent use of your twenty words in this thoughtful and thought-provoking piece; it conveys a powerful message about those out-of-reach aspects of life. We cannot literally re-visit childhood, just as we can't see the future.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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You have made excellent use of your twenty words in this thoughtful and thought-provoking piece; it conveys a powerful message about those out-of-reach aspects of life. We cannot literally re-visit childhood, just as we can't see the future.
Comment Written 16-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Janice! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
