Sequestered
Never forget that life is a continuum...48 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Thank you for sharing the complex acrylic and your thought provoking poem. I liked the way the realization brought back childhood's memories. Best wishes in the 20-Word Poem contest- Joan
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you for sharing the complex acrylic and your thought provoking poem. I liked the way the realization brought back childhood's memories. Best wishes in the 20-Word Poem contest- Joan
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Joan! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
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I'm in the same club! Enjoy the remains of your Sunday- Joan
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is another good poem and interesting art. It is philosophical. Do you mean the eternity is where we are going back to be children again? It is like a closed loop. There is a show on Netflix called "Dark" which is a German series. It is very interesting about time travel and so on. I highly recommended it.
Well done.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is another good poem and interesting art. It is philosophical. Do you mean the eternity is where we are going back to be children again? It is like a closed loop. There is a show on Netflix called "Dark" which is a German series. It is very interesting about time travel and so on. I highly recommended it.
Well done.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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I'm one of those nutty poets that leaves the final interpretation up to the reader, Lisa... so this is me smiling and nodding over here in response to your questions (wink, wink)! ;) You know, twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
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You are a fun nerd.
Comment from Lobber
Yvette,
As expected, you can do in twenty words what others try to do in thirty, forty words and still flounder. Super choice of artwork.! Best of luck my friend.
- Lobber
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Yvette,
As expected, you can do in twenty words what others try to do in thirty, forty words and still flounder. Super choice of artwork.! Best of luck my friend.
- Lobber
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Jer! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Raul1
You have written your poem very well. It is rich with difficult words. I like your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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You have written your poem very well. It is rich with difficult words. I like your poetry. Excellent work! No mistakes found in your poem. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thanx so much for the great review, Raul!! ;) Take care this week! ;) Yvette
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You're welcome! I will. :)
Comment from LisaMay
The title is rather thought-provoking before I even got to the poem. Sequestered could refer to the current Covid stay-at-home situation, or to the childhood rainbows that have to stay hidden.
We are caught in the middle - forever wanting something we can't have... we can't turn the clock back, no matter how appealing memories of those past times may be.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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The title is rather thought-provoking before I even got to the poem. Sequestered could refer to the current Covid stay-at-home situation, or to the childhood rainbows that have to stay hidden.
We are caught in the middle - forever wanting something we can't have... we can't turn the clock back, no matter how appealing memories of those past times may be.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, LisaMay, always one of the few that knows how to 'read ' a poem (wink, wink)! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello dear Yvette,
I just said to my husband this evening how I wish we "could go back and relive our childhood." It all passes by far too quickly, and when it is occurring, do we ever really appreciate all that we have/had?
Beautiful imagery!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Hello dear Yvette,
I just said to my husband this evening how I wish we "could go back and relive our childhood." It all passes by far too quickly, and when it is occurring, do we ever really appreciate all that we have/had?
Beautiful imagery!
Thank you for sharing!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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There are some parts I'd re-do and some parts...? No way!! ;) :) I wasn't exactly perfect and high school? Forget about it! Yessss... Sours and more and many logs for the fire! Oh, we do need to spend some time together one day!! ;) :) Thanx, my lady, and take care this week (I'll be in touch shortly... hopefully you'll have recovered your pride and dignity by then....) :) :) :) Yvette
Comment from Susan X Smith
This is a well written and engaging short poem which well meets the contest requirements. The picture is a great addition. It was enjoyable to read as the words fit together seamlessly.
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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This is a well written and engaging short poem which well meets the contest requirements. The picture is a great addition. It was enjoyable to read as the words fit together seamlessly.
Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much, Susan! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
Comment from equestrik
Lovely writing-you are very talented. I enjoyed the picture you chose as well and love that in twenty words you made a lovely visual picture with those words.
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reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Lovely writing-you are very talented. I enjoyed the picture you chose as well and love that in twenty words you made a lovely visual picture with those words.
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Comment Written 15-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, my lady! ;) Twenty words isn't much to work with, but I enjoy a challenge when it comes to numbers - lol! ;) :) Once a nerd, always a nerd, I suppose... thanx for the review and have a wonderful week of lovely October skies! ;) Yvette
