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A Second Chance

Saving dogs and cats from shelters

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Franca,

I love this poem about rescuing a pet and taking him home... cold snout and all. A lovely entry and congratulations on your prize for this contest!!

Melissa

 Comment Written 22-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 22-Oct-2020
    Well their black moist noises are always wet and fresh ..

    I used snout because it rhymes with out

    I knew readers would get the gist..the poor pooch in the pick was dumped in April 2019 .. but after being rescued he soon found a happy forever home ..

    Sadly too few do .

    Keep safe!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
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Gosh, I'm one of those people that would have more pets than sense if I allowed it! ;) Congrats on second place, my lady!! ;) Thanx so very much for joining the Octo-fun this month, Tempeste, and have a Wonderful Wednesday! ;) Yvette
P.S. Sorry I'm a bit behind... it's been just ONE of those weeks!! :) ;)

 Comment Written 21-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 21-Oct-2020
    Thanks M.Y Roger !

    Glad you enjoyed the read .. animals are my favorite subject so when I saw dog shelters was celebrated in October I took a spot ..

    at one stage we had 7 cats ..my father was the voice of reason in our household .. I m hopeless..

    Ciao!

Comment from Mia Twysted
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My parents are working on adopting a dog as thiers recently passes away. It is sad what animals go through. People can be so cruel. Your words are tinged with sadness yet you leave the reader with hope on the new family being made.

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 19-Oct-2020
    First off , I m
    sorry for your loss ..losing a pet is tough .. I ve be been there too .. ( sigh)

    I m glad your parents have decided to taking in a shelter dog .. for the pooch in the pic thing turned out well ..

    He was adopted and now is surrounded by love ..

    Thank you for sharing your story

    Keep safe !

Comment from palmart
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Funny poem about how dogs forgive owners (and luckily for them, there are other humans that remember the forgotten pets). Saving pets from shelters is a very altruistic task and it is valued not only by pets but also from other humans... Great picture that shows loneliness and carelessness...

 Comment Written 18-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    The dog in the picture was dumped by his owner in April 2019 but he was lucky .. once rescued he was relocated soon after in a forever home ..

    Lonely and downtrodden ... betrayed by his own family .. the family he loved and trusted ..

    It?s heart breaking ..

    Thank you for reviewing my entry!




reply by palmart on 18-Oct-2020
    Your´re welcome Writer! And that was a tough situation!

    Have an incredible week!
reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    You too !
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Aw, poor pooch! At least he found a new home where he will receive good care. In two quatrains, you have told the past, present and the future of this once-abandoned dog. The photograph complements your poem well.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 18-Oct-2020
    He was a sad sight but at least his story has a happy ending ..

    Too many end up being gassed .. more owners need to be responsible

    ... pets need to be sterilised ...

    This would help considerably in keeping the number of strays down ...and there would be a lot less suffering going on too...

    Thank you for the kind review!
Comment from Gloria ....
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Aw, he does look like a nice boy who could use a good home. He was lucky you came around. I purchased my old cat, who was seven years old at the time, from the pound and he is a pure joy.

Just one typo:

Poor pooch, dumped and tide (tied) to a pole

Wishing you much luck with the voters.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 17-Oct-2020
    Thank you .. I just read your review .. while I was editing I change tied to chained ..

    This pooch was dumped in April 2019..

    I m glad to say that the rescue shelter found a forever home for him.

    He looked downtrodden in that pic but he is all smiling now!

    Glad you opted to save a shelter cat and gave it a loving home...

    Most of my pets were strays too!

    Keep safe!