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Poem My Faith9 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This short poem shows the effect of hope on all kinds of troubles. It lights the way the path to better times.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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This short poem shows the effect of hope on all kinds of troubles. It lights the way the path to better times.
Congrats on the win.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thanks for the congrats & for reading zanya
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You're welcome on both accounts, Zanya.
Joan
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win for this elegant and fresh take on faith--lovely alliteration in DDDD--powerful and profound--a welcome deviation from the usual in this genre.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Congrats on your win for this elegant and fresh take on faith--lovely alliteration in DDDD--powerful and profound--a welcome deviation from the usual in this genre.
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Superb review zanya
Comment from lyenochka
Wow! So brief and yet it shows the power of faith against "the descent of absolute darkness" and affects future generations as well. Wonderfully said and Congratulations on the win!!
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Wow! So brief and yet it shows the power of faith against "the descent of absolute darkness" and affects future generations as well. Wonderfully said and Congratulations on the win!!
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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That's fantastic Lyenochka - and a superb review Zanya
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 04-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Wow - this is an honour ! Zanya
Comment from Cindy Decker
Zanya, I really like this 5 7 5 poem. With just a little light, we can get to know the Lord and conquer the evil around us. I like the photos and your inspiring.
Very hope filled poem. Sometimes when there is chaos all around us, even a flicker of light will guide us.
Best wishes,
Cindy
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Zanya, I really like this 5 7 5 poem. With just a little light, we can get to know the Lord and conquer the evil around us. I like the photos and your inspiring.
Very hope filled poem. Sometimes when there is chaos all around us, even a flicker of light will guide us.
Best wishes,
Cindy
Comment Written 22-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Thanks for that great review zanya
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You?re welcome.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Zanya, it is a beautiful poem about your strong feelings about faith, and it is also a great entry for the contest. I wish you would put some dollars on your writing. That's the only way I can promote my work. Good luck. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Hi Zanya, it is a beautiful poem about your strong feelings about faith, and it is also a great entry for the contest. I wish you would put some dollars on your writing. That's the only way I can promote my work. Good luck. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 19-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 17-Mar-2021
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Thanks for reading zanya
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I think this is a terrific haiku.
Sometimes spiritual poetry can be "preachy."
I found your piece to be light (in both luminescense and weight), airy yet marvelously heavy in it's message.
I like the understated quality of your poem. "though dim" "may help disperse."
The voice behind your poem is marvelously kind and humble. Fine job.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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I think this is a terrific haiku.
Sometimes spiritual poetry can be "preachy."
I found your piece to be light (in both luminescense and weight), airy yet marvelously heavy in it's message.
I like the understated quality of your poem. "though dim" "may help disperse."
The voice behind your poem is marvelously kind and humble. Fine job.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Superb review with 6 twinkling stars zanya
Comment from BethShelby
Lets keep that light of faith burning. Sometimes we feel or faith isn't as strong as we would like it to be but If we have the faith of a grain of mustard seed according to the Bible we can mighty things. Nice entry for the faith contest.
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Lets keep that light of faith burning. Sometimes we feel or faith isn't as strong as we would like it to be but If we have the faith of a grain of mustard seed according to the Bible we can mighty things. Nice entry for the faith contest.
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
Comment from Sugarray77
A very unique point of view about faith. The Light of Faith (Jesus) is shining and does offer light into the darkest corners. Well said, Zanya!
Melissa
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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A very unique point of view about faith. The Light of Faith (Jesus) is shining and does offer light into the darkest corners. Well said, Zanya!
Melissa
Comment Written 18-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 06-Nov-2020
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Great review zanya
