Lilacs
Brings back memories13 total reviews
Comment from Carlos' girl
wow, this is just beautiful. my mom sent me out to pick violets. they are so little, she put them in a shotglass
youre poem.is deeply nostalgic, it brings back my memories. wbeautiful
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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wow, this is just beautiful. my mom sent me out to pick violets. they are so little, she put them in a shotglass
youre poem.is deeply nostalgic, it brings back my memories. wbeautiful
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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My mom's name was violet! She liked those too, but was especially in love with lilacs. Thank you for reading and for your kind words.
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isnt that. sweet?! her name was violet. how pretty. my mom's name was dorothy, i dedicated fanstory award to her that I received. The poem is " Follow The Yellow Brick Road". I'd be honored if you read it.
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
I really like this piece. It's funny, I just wrote a poem about lilacs myself! They are indeed cool flowers and their scent is so heady!
Your syllables are all just right and I love the element of having Mom with you as part of your memories of lilacs. Makes them even more special. Thank you and good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer, (--wink--)
I really like this piece. It's funny, I just wrote a poem about lilacs myself! They are indeed cool flowers and their scent is so heady!
Your syllables are all just right and I love the element of having Mom with you as part of your memories of lilacs. Makes them even more special. Thank you and good luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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A fellow flower lover! Thank you for this nice review. I spent a lot of time with my mom among the lilacs, they always remind me of her. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Lovely entry for the
5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
Lilacs are beautiful flowers and you have a lovely memory of your mom
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Lovely entry for the
5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. Beautiful presentation.
Lilacs are beautiful flowers and you have a lovely memory of your mom
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this nice review..it's very appreciated. :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Lilacs, has the right set up and reminds us all, I think, and our parents. Lilac bushes were the staple of a happy home.
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This 5-7-5, Lilacs, has the right set up and reminds us all, I think, and our parents. Lilac bushes were the staple of a happy home.
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you for this nice review. My mom and I spent a lot of time among the lilacs. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
I love everything about this poem! The presentation, the alliteration, the fact that it's making me forget about winter! Well done lady! I think this should do very well in the contest! Good luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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I love everything about this poem! The presentation, the alliteration, the fact that it's making me forget about winter! Well done lady! I think this should do very well in the contest! Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you writerheather. You are a flower as well. A little blue flower that grows in Scotland on the moors. Thanks again.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
This is a lovely poem accentuated by a beautiful picture. I hope this is a winning entry for the 5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt. Best of luck!
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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This is a lovely poem accentuated by a beautiful picture. I hope this is a winning entry for the 5-7-5 A Flower writing prompt. Best of luck!
Comment Written 26-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading and for the good wishes. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Author this is a terrific poem. The lilacs are such scented flowers and for them to return memories of you picking them with your mother is wonderful.
Wishing you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Author this is a terrific poem. The lilacs are such scented flowers and for them to return memories of you picking them with your mother is wonderful.
Wishing you much luck with the voters.
Gloria
Comment Written 25-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2020
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Thank you for being so kind, reading and reviewing my poem. :)
Comment from Edward Escobar
Quite a very touching, sentimental poem along with those wonderful flowers that I could smell and causes me to see a past as well. A well enjoyed poem. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Quite a very touching, sentimental poem along with those wonderful flowers that I could smell and causes me to see a past as well. A well enjoyed poem. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your kind words and this great review. :)
Comment from juliaSjames
Nostalgia exudes from this beautiful write.
I was a little thrown by "send scents" in the first line. Perhaps you might consider setting aside the alliteration in favour of a verb like "breathe"?
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Nostalgia exudes from this beautiful write.
I was a little thrown by "send scents" in the first line. Perhaps you might consider setting aside the alliteration in favour of a verb like "breathe"?
Good luck in the contest.
Blessings Julia
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you for reading. It's kind of a tongue twister I'll admit...but I kind of like the way it sounds. Thanks again for the review. :)
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
This is a sweet poem that meets the flower haiku format very well. You hear that a lot, that flowers remind us of our mothers. Scientists say the sense of smell is the most potent and oldest of the senses.
This is a strong entry for the contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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This is a sweet poem that meets the flower haiku format very well. You hear that a lot, that flowers remind us of our mothers. Scientists say the sense of smell is the most potent and oldest of the senses.
This is a strong entry for the contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020
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Thank you, it really brings me back to when my mom and I were together. Thanks again for reading.
