Comment from equestrik

Excellent

One of my very favorite flowers are lilacs. This is a beautiful presentation with both the lovely picture and your words of love and sweet sentiment for your mom. Best to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020

Thank you for reading. My mom loved lilacs and brought bunches into our house for there delightful scent. Thanks again.

Comment from roof35

Excellent

What a lovely way to remember your mom. You followed the rules and penned an excellent poem for the 5/7/5 contest. Your illustration pairs perfectly with your words.

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020

Thank you for this nice review. :)

Comment from lancellot

Excellent

Yes, this is simple and sweet. Not a single word goes unused in building this emotional scene. And When you add the presentation of the imagery with it, it is perfect. I think you have a winning entry. Don't change a thing.

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 Comment Written 24-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 24-Oct-2020

Thank you for this encouraging review. I'm really glad you like it.