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Prose and Poem Prayers for Fanstorians

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Comment from Sugarray77
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Your call to prayer is very timely, Helen. I do not know Portia, but the urge to pray for her came to me as I read. Thank you for extending your kindness to her and reminding us to hold each other up. :)

Melissa

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much, Melissa! Appreciate you joining us in prayer! With all of us praying, I hope we'll hear from her soon. Hugs!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Your prayer form in the style of the peppered pickle is great, Helen. Great work with conveying your heartfelt message. I have not heard from Portia either. I did not know of the health issues of her family. Your poem reads well with a strong and clear message. Thanks for sharing and caring.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for the review, Jan. Hope you are taking time for yourself as you give care to Tim.
    Hugs!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Keep on Praying
by lyenochka

Hello, Helen,

Thank you for reminding me to pray for our friends. I have a friend fighting cancer. Do you remember Douglas the badger? He died last year. We got very close talking to each other every day in a chat room. Even though he was fighting cancer he helped me get through my depression. He was an amazing man and friend.

Thank you very much, well done.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    I didn't know Douglas the Badger. I know Darren who goes by Brother Badger. He's just published his book of poems. I'm so glad you were able to connect with him. He was blessed to be there for you. Thanks for reviewing, Gypsy! Hugs!
reply by Gypsy Blue Rose on 27-Oct-2020
    Funny story, I chatted with Darren who aka Brother Badger and found out we both lived in Sacramento, before I moved to Pasadena down south, and we met in person. He is a character but very nice. Yes, Douglas was a blessing for me too. Thank you
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Glad you knew both "badger" poets! 💖
Comment from Suzanna Ray
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Dear Helen, thank you for letting me know about Portia, and what is happening in her family. I had noticed that she had not reviewed any of my posts for sometime, but many reviewers are moving or grieving or recovering for a time; and are not active reviewers.
But when it's a health issue, and a serious one, we do need to call upon God's grace to do what is best for her, her husband, and her son.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Suzanna! I'm glad that you know her and now know why she's been absent. Hugs!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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You included so much in this short piece and yet the message is smooth and easy to understand. Short but perfect. Very nicely done for the addition to the book

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 26-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much, Barb. I was about to fix it to remove any sense of lack of grace in one line. Your super rating is so appreciated, Barb! Hugs!
Comment from --Turtle.
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Hi, Helen,

I read through your poem, the form is brief, but does a sound job of grabbing attention and relaying the thoughts and concerns, and requesting prayers, even though it can be disheartening when you don't or can't know what is happening on the other side of a screen. Connected virtually or not, these thoughts are felt, and hopefully heard, related, and shared.


 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Turtle. There are connections we can't see - physical and spiritual!
    Hugs!
Comment from aryr
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This was so important Helen, the fact that you not only reach out to other members but pray for them as well is so important. It is great that you take the time and interest in others especially during this pandemic time. I enjoyed your Peppered Pickle. Well done.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thank you so much for understanding, Alie! Hugs!
reply by aryr on 27-Oct-2020
    Awww you are so welcome.
Comment from Janice Canerdy
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I don't think she has posted a poem lately. I enjoy her poems. The peppered pickle poem is very concise, but yours delivers a strong, uplifting message about loss and the Lord's love. I never know about
losses of members till someone mentions them in their posts.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    It's been a long time since she posted. Thanks for the review, Janice! Hugs!
Comment from roof35
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An excellent prayer for another of your Fan Story friends. It sounds like she is a caretaker for her family. May the good Lord give her strength and peace.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Judy! I believe she's had a very long battle with cancer. She just returned this year and then is taking another break.
    Hugs!
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice image, Helen,
and thanks for sharing
about Portia. I am sorry
to hear about her situation.
-Not too long ago, it seemed
she was doing really well and
was back on FS.
-You wrote a very heartfelt
poem for so many who are
dealing with life's situations.

 Comment Written 26-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
    Thank you, Pam! I was worried when she didn't return my texts. Hugs!
reply by Pam (respa) on 27-Oct-2020
    You are welcome.