Hallow's Eve
Rhyming ~ Nod to Poe32 total reviews
Comment from Marienkiefer
I only just saw this....
-Very interesting constructs and ruminations.
-Well plotted, inciting events and enrapturing to readers.
A very nice period poem, with atmospheric detailing. No mistaking the Hallows Eve flare and fervour with absolutely the right portions of gruesome detailing.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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I only just saw this....
-Very interesting constructs and ruminations.
-Well plotted, inciting events and enrapturing to readers.
A very nice period poem, with atmospheric detailing. No mistaking the Hallows Eve flare and fervour with absolutely the right portions of gruesome detailing.
Comment Written 25-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Hello Marien, thank you for your lovely review. I wrote this a few years ago and thought since it is Halloween week, it would be fun to repost it. So glad you like it.
Melissa
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Hallow's Eve, is a fun parody of the famous Poe poem and touched with a bit of humor to help the readers get a jolly giggle out of the scene.
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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This poem, Hallow's Eve, is a fun parody of the famous Poe poem and touched with a bit of humor to help the readers get a jolly giggle out of the scene.
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Hi Bill. Thank you. I am delighted that you (a poet with a fantastic sense of humor) saw the little fun quirks in this piece. I wrote it a few years ago and thought that since it is Halloween week, I would repost it. Glad you like it, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from irishauthorme
Neat! You kept Poe's rhythm going there, and told a scary Halloween story in poetry!
I liked the reference to Poe's raven, and your little nod to the effect the "amber sipping" may have had on your observations (Or were they illusions?), and perhaps caused by
"mental strain."
Good work,
irish
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Neat! You kept Poe's rhythm going there, and told a scary Halloween story in poetry!
I liked the reference to Poe's raven, and your little nod to the effect the "amber sipping" may have had on your observations (Or were they illusions?), and perhaps caused by
"mental strain."
Good work,
irish
Comment Written 24-Oct-2022
reply by the author on 25-Oct-2022
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Hello Irish.. haha, you really saw all the little nuances to this piece. I thought I would repost it since it is Halloween week. I'm so glad you liked it!!
Melissa
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Congrats on your win for this creepy whimsy! Glad I caught up to this--an ambitious undertaking in fine rhyme! Startling and fresh imagery throughout.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Congrats on your win for this creepy whimsy! Glad I caught up to this--an ambitious undertaking in fine rhyme! Startling and fresh imagery throughout.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello Elizabeth... thank you very much for the nod... much appreciated!
Melissa
Comment from sammielwf
Sugarray!
Oh I must admit dear poet- this was an absolute gem. If I had had another star left over I would have given it a six!
I really fell into the story here- and was captured by the flow of the words and imagery! A contest winner for sure!
Well done and you just put another whole layer of "scary" to next years Halloween night!
Sammielwf.
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Sugarray!
Oh I must admit dear poet- this was an absolute gem. If I had had another star left over I would have given it a six!
I really fell into the story here- and was captured by the flow of the words and imagery! A contest winner for sure!
Well done and you just put another whole layer of "scary" to next years Halloween night!
Sammielwf.
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Hello Sam... you have made my day with your wonderful review and comments. Thank you so much. I appreciate knowing you send me a virtual six!! Such fun!
Melissa
Comment from Contests
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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 A contest winning entry! A seven star rating from the Contest Committee for posting the winning contest entry. |
Comment Written 05-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2020
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Thank you again for the lovely recognition!!
Melissa
Comment from Mistydawn
This would definitely be right up Poe's alley with its odd, eerie yet mysterious vibe. It's well-written, interesting, your great word choice paints a frightening picture in the reader's mind.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This would definitely be right up Poe's alley with its odd, eerie yet mysterious vibe. It's well-written, interesting, your great word choice paints a frightening picture in the reader's mind.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Hi Misty. Thank you, sweet friend. I was inspired by the Nod to Poe contest last week and reread The Raven. That trochaic beat got stuck in my head and I just went with it. LOL. I always value your opinion!! Thanks again.
Melissa
Comment from Jasmine Girl
I like your rendition of the Nod to Poe and your making it into a Halloween poem. I read The Raven by Poe and realize why you are using the similar structure, rhyming scheme and meter.
You did an exceptional job.
I want to enter for the Halloween story and need to hurry up.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I like your rendition of the Nod to Poe and your making it into a Halloween poem. I read The Raven by Poe and realize why you are using the similar structure, rhyming scheme and meter.
You did an exceptional job.
I want to enter for the Halloween story and need to hurry up.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Hi Lisa. Thank you so very much. I had fun trying to imitate Poe. I really appreciate your thoughts on this one. :)
Melissa
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I found these
words reminding me of Halloween Night! I think 'll go back and read
the "Raven"! The artwork goes well with the words and theme of this poem. Enjoyed the read of this poem!.....Maria
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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The author's words are interesting, clear and creative. I found these
words reminding me of Halloween Night! I think 'll go back and read
the "Raven"! The artwork goes well with the words and theme of this poem. Enjoyed the read of this poem!.....Maria
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much Maria!! I had fun pulling this together.
Melissa
Comment from poetwatch
I haven't read Poe in a while, Melissa, but he is good on those cold nights under the moon. :) Like-- as it slitter on the sidewalk seeing shadows in the night sideway glances made me stutter at it's horrid sight. You know, I feel a little mordid myself. Thank you for sharing. This is a good offering for the Halloween poetry.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I haven't read Poe in a while, Melissa, but he is good on those cold nights under the moon. :) Like-- as it slitter on the sidewalk seeing shadows in the night sideway glances made me stutter at it's horrid sight. You know, I feel a little mordid myself. Thank you for sharing. This is a good offering for the Halloween poetry.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you very much, Jose. I loved your punny review about sidewalks slithering in the shadows. Haha. So fun. Glad you liked the Nod to Poe verse. :)
Melissa
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I wish I could write like you do. I write at the moment and then it goes out my ear. :)
