Island Interlude
A Tanka for the Short and Colorful contest16 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This short, colorful poem, Island Interlude, really does create a 'sensual sunset' that brings in these selected shades bid goodnight to the day. Nice.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This short, colorful poem, Island Interlude, really does create a 'sensual sunset' that brings in these selected shades bid goodnight to the day. Nice.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece. Thank you for dropping by to read and share your insights.
Comment from Minglement
Hello, mystery poet. You've penned a lovely entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt. Beautiful descriptions and color choices. I loved the last line. Good luck in the contest :)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Hello, mystery poet. You've penned a lovely entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt. Beautiful descriptions and color choices. I loved the last line. Good luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sharon Haiste
I think this is a good entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt.
This verse is a nice match for the colorful picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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I think this is a good entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt.
This verse is a nice match for the colorful picture.
Well done and good luck to you with the contest.
Sharon
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Tanka about the beautiful described colors we can see and enjoy over the ocean at sunset. An excellent picture to complement your poem.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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A very well-written Tanka about the beautiful described colors we can see and enjoy over the ocean at sunset. An excellent picture to complement your poem.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you!
Comment from jaded831
In a few words you incorporated the colors into a magical experience. Most of the entries don't know what short is. You nailed it. You topped your words with a beautiful picture. You got my vote.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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In a few words you incorporated the colors into a magical experience. Most of the entries don't know what short is. You nailed it. You topped your words with a beautiful picture. You got my vote.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you! I was a bit confused by the lengthy entries. I wanted to share an experience, not a short story! I appreciate your positive feedback!
Comment from Liz O'Neill
Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in and get them experientially involved. The repetition of s's especially effects the sizzle sound. Well orchestrated.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Your use of the literary technique of alliteration will draw the reader in and get them experientially involved. The repetition of s's especially effects the sizzle sound. Well orchestrated.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you for sharing your insightful comments!
Comment from Dick Waters
This is a great picture to add words to.
The colors are a nice contrast, and your words do justice to it.
Even the border color is a nice choice.
Good luck in the contest.
Dick
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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This is a great picture to add words to.
The colors are a nice contrast, and your words do justice to it.
Even the border color is a nice choice.
Good luck in the contest.
Dick
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Thank you for your positive feedback!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well and covered more than two colors. The presentation is beautiful.
I like the sunset colors, great imagery.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Hello anonymous
Great entry for the Short and Colorful writing prompt contest. You followed the rules well and covered more than two colors. The presentation is beautiful.
I like the sunset colors, great imagery.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Glad you enjoyed this little piece of paradise!
Comment from Mark D. R.
Both artwork and words emphasize your colorful poem. Your descriptions for sunset, skies, and waters are most expressive.
Please consider adding a space before your hyphen in the first line.
Best wishes in the future voting.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Both artwork and words emphasize your colorful poem. Your descriptions for sunset, skies, and waters are most expressive.
Please consider adding a space before your hyphen in the first line.
Best wishes in the future voting.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So glad you liked this little piece of paradise~
Comment from Julie Sandy
a beautiful image to go with this poem, good just of words in such a short poem you manage to convey the magic and beauty of colour.
Natures colours are the best
Good luck in the competition
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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a beautiful image to go with this poem, good just of words in such a short poem you manage to convey the magic and beauty of colour.
Natures colours are the best
Good luck in the competition
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So glad you liked this little piece of paradise~
