Island Interlude
A Tanka for the Short and Colorful contest16 total reviews
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written poem. Love your choice of words. Tropical sunset lush explosion of colours tantalized as coral and magenta skies dip into sapphire waters. Absolutely beautiful photo to go with your words. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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Beautifully written poem. Love your choice of words. Tropical sunset lush explosion of colours tantalized as coral and magenta skies dip into sapphire waters. Absolutely beautiful photo to go with your words. Nicely done.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So glad you enjoyed this piece of paradise!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
You brought the magical colours here of blues and golds as the sun sets on a tropical island, I see sub-tropical sunsets every evening, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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You brought the magical colours here of blues and golds as the sun sets on a tropical island, I see sub-tropical sunsets every evening, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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I can imagine how beautiful your sunsets are on your island!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
All my favorite colors--so vivid--I see an overflowing cup of rainbow slush. Love the imagery of the colors taking a dip, so to speak. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
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All my favorite colors--so vivid--I see an overflowing cup of rainbow slush. Love the imagery of the colors taking a dip, so to speak. Good luck. Cheers. LIZ
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this one on island sunsets!
Comment from Janice Canerdy
Your beautiful, vividly descriptive tanka certainly meets the prompt requirements. You take this reader's imagination to a scene she would love to witness.
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Your beautiful, vividly descriptive tanka certainly meets the prompt requirements. You take this reader's imagination to a scene she would love to witness.
Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020
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So happy you enjoyed this one on island sunsets!
Comment from Carlos' girl
aah, i love the rhymes here as well as the luscious colors.
just the sound of these words evokes feelings and thoughts of the Caribbean...very scrumptious poem!
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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aah, i love the rhymes here as well as the luscious colors.
just the sound of these words evokes feelings and thoughts of the Caribbean...very scrumptious poem!
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your positive thoughts!
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you're welcome
Comment from equestrik
This is a great entry for the 'Short and Colorful' contest. I love the combination of the picture with your writing. Best of luck to you in the contest. Be well and stay safe!
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reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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This is a great entry for the 'Short and Colorful' contest. I love the combination of the picture with your writing. Best of luck to you in the contest. Be well and stay safe!
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Comment Written 27-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 27-Oct-2020
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Thank you so much for sharing your positive thoughts!
