Comment from angel123

Excellent

Your poem is interesting and informative. I enjoyed reading it. It flows well with technology and your artwork choice goes well with your message. Best wishes

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to these geniuses! I hope to win.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Excellent naani, Raul. So right you are that those two men changed the world in ways that we are still learning about.

Wishing you much luck with the voters with this fine write. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks! I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute to these two geniuses.

Comment from amada

Excellent

One of my sons work in Silicon Valley; I am very proud of him, therefore I feel I should review this post. I like your first line the most, .world of computers and technology...Your words express thankfulness and admiration. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute!

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Good

An unusual employment of the naani format here but certainly a nod to those two gentlemen. Thanx for sharing and best of luck! ;)

and tehcnology, --> and technology,

It's silicon --> It's Silicon

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks! I have fixed the mistakes. You can check it again. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Very nice images.
-Each one is a giant
in the computer industry.
-You have written a
good poem as a tribute to them.
-The syllable count is good.
-I like how your structured
your poem in two parts.
-One about them; and
the other about Silicon Valley!
-A good ending, too.
-Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 28-Oct-2020

Thanks! I hope to win. I'm glad you enjoyed my tribute!