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Poems and Prose

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Comment from Y. M. Roger
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BIG fan of gummy bears over here! :) ;) Congrats on second place, L! ;) This was definitely the tightest competition the Stack has ever seen - hooray! Thank you so much for joining in the Sweet Stack this time and enjoy your sugar rush! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 03-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
    Thank you so much...it was fun.
Comment from Stephen Force
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Excellent, I am a big fan of 5-7-5 poetry your stacking four and keeping them confined to the same topic is both impressive and creative. I like that you also gummy bear colored the stanza's. Nice!

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
    Thanks, I'm so glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from roof35
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This is an excellent entry for the 5/7/5 sweet stack. I have never liked gummies but my husband loves them so we have them around sometimes. This is well written and should do well in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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This put a big smile on my face. I love the reverence to candy! Very enjoyable. This was a fun poem with wonderful word choices and a light and fun feel. Great job.

 Comment Written 29-Oct-2020


reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
    Thank You!