Predator
Naani poetry17 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I have not read a Naani poem in some time, with its "expression of one and all". I admired your description of the "tundra" and its desolation, plus the matching picture. Cheers- Joan
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I have not read a Naani poem in some time, with its "expression of one and all". I admired your description of the "tundra" and its desolation, plus the matching picture. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you Joan!! Much appreciated, my friend.
Melissa
Comment from Mia Twysted
I like the play on time with this piece. It gives more meaning to the small moments in our lives. Makes it more intense leading one to slow down for just a second to take stock of the moment they are in.
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I like the play on time with this piece. It gives more meaning to the small moments in our lives. Makes it more intense leading one to slow down for just a second to take stock of the moment they are in.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
I like you poem about the fragility of life in such an unbearably cold and desolate place. The artwork is amazing and adds a lot.
For some reason, the image of cold "stalking" didn't quite work for me. Cold doesn't feel to me like a predator who stalks but rather as part of nature that can't help but exist. But that's just me. You liked it and probably a lot of other folks did as well.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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I like you poem about the fragility of life in such an unbearably cold and desolate place. The artwork is amazing and adds a lot.
For some reason, the image of cold "stalking" didn't quite work for me. Cold doesn't feel to me like a predator who stalks but rather as part of nature that can't help but exist. But that's just me. You liked it and probably a lot of other folks did as well.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you!!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Naani about nature that is not measured in years but in moments that last only a whole before they are gone. A perfect picture moment captured to complement your poem.
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A very well-written Naani about nature that is not measured in years but in moments that last only a whole before they are gone. A perfect picture moment captured to complement your poem.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Bill Schott
This naani, Predator, has the proper formatting and uses twenty-five syllables to make the point that life is short, and in some places - here and gone.
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This naani, Predator, has the proper formatting and uses twenty-five syllables to make the point that life is short, and in some places - here and gone.
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thanks so much, Bill!
Comment from lyenochka
Such a gorgeous picture! This is intriguing and thought-provoking that a harsh and challenging environment can affect the passage of time from life in years but in "moments." Best wishes in the contest!
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Such a gorgeous picture! This is intriguing and thought-provoking that a harsh and challenging environment can affect the passage of time from life in years but in "moments." Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you, Helen.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the Write a Naani writing prompt contest. It's a new form to me and I love it. I want to try it. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. Good luck in the contest.
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Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the Write a Naani writing prompt contest. It's a new form to me and I love it. I want to try it. Good syllable count and connection between lines. Pretty presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Patty Palmer
With in this part of the world, it gets so incredibly cold life could be measured in moments. One may not live an entire day. Your poem is very good and the picture besides being a beautiful picture, it also enhances your poem greatly! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
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With in this part of the world, it gets so incredibly cold life could be measured in moments. One may not live an entire day. Your poem is very good and the picture besides being a beautiful picture, it also enhances your poem greatly! Good luck with the contest!
Patty
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from angel123
I enjoyed reading your descriptive short poem. I like your interesting subject and your mindful message and wonderful artwork choice. Best wishes! And good luck in the contest.
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I enjoyed reading your descriptive short poem. I like your interesting subject and your mindful message and wonderful artwork choice. Best wishes! And good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from C. Gale Burnett
This made me cold just reading it. It is a beautiful presentation in its entirety. I like the idea of 'cold stalking', the description of the 'vast, desolated tundra' which links directly to your last two lines. Those last 2 lines made credible the way you described the cold and the tundra.
Gale
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This made me cold just reading it. It is a beautiful presentation in its entirety. I like the idea of 'cold stalking', the description of the 'vast, desolated tundra' which links directly to your last two lines. Those last 2 lines made credible the way you described the cold and the tundra.
Gale
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
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You are so welcome.
