Predator
Naani poetry17 total reviews
Comment from wishawave
This is a well written Naani poem. In short verses it displays possible life and death scenarios in a desolated tundra. I also like the choice of the picture, which goes so well with the photo. I hope the author good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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This is a well written Naani poem. In short verses it displays possible life and death scenarios in a desolated tundra. I also like the choice of the picture, which goes so well with the photo. I hope the author good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from rjuselius
Bravo! This is an exquisite piece of poetry dear anonymous! Such a profound philosophical sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Bravo! This is an exquisite piece of poetry dear anonymous! Such a profound philosophical sentiment.
Thank you for sharing!
Good luck!
Blessings and a larger than life hug!
Rebekka x
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 30-Oct-2020
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Thank you sooo much,Rebekka!! So appreciate your lovely review!
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My pleasure entirely dear friend <3
Comment from tempeste
La tundra is only for the toughest and the most resourceful...it's an unforgiving world and yet it fascinates .
I wrote a poem on the arctic fox which I never posted so I read about the tundra
In Polar tundra the soil is frozen from 25 to a metres downward ..so no trees can grow just moss , heath , algae and lichen
The more southern part of the tundra in Canada e Russia , Scandinavia the upper soil in Summer defrosts and there is more vegetation to sustain animals like the ox , the arctic fox and hare , the snowy owl and lemmings.... and near the coasts polar bears
I love that you made the cold the predator, the stalker ..your closing line is is chilly ..
Some mammoths have been found in the Russian tundra ..
also human bodies have emerged and scientists are very worried that these people died of smallpox ..
.. some 300 million died of the disease in the Arctic ( like when the Spanish infected the Aztec etc )
In extreme cold weather the diseases does not died ..not even if it is frozen .. once thawed it's back in action.
So as you can see the tundra is truly deadly
A beautiful eye catching pic that makes you feel some of that dread your poem speaks of.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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La tundra is only for the toughest and the most resourceful...it's an unforgiving world and yet it fascinates .
I wrote a poem on the arctic fox which I never posted so I read about the tundra
In Polar tundra the soil is frozen from 25 to a metres downward ..so no trees can grow just moss , heath , algae and lichen
The more southern part of the tundra in Canada e Russia , Scandinavia the upper soil in Summer defrosts and there is more vegetation to sustain animals like the ox , the arctic fox and hare , the snowy owl and lemmings.... and near the coasts polar bears
I love that you made the cold the predator, the stalker ..your closing line is is chilly ..
Some mammoths have been found in the Russian tundra ..
also human bodies have emerged and scientists are very worried that these people died of smallpox ..
.. some 300 million died of the disease in the Arctic ( like when the Spanish infected the Aztec etc )
In extreme cold weather the diseases does not died ..not even if it is frozen .. once thawed it's back in action.
So as you can see the tundra is truly deadly
A beautiful eye catching pic that makes you feel some of that dread your poem speaks of.
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you so very much Franca! I enjoyed reading your review!!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! A good personification of the weather here -- hate that cold weather! :) :) Thanx for sharing your take on a naani and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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LOL!! A good personification of the weather here -- hate that cold weather! :) :) Thanx for sharing your take on a naani and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 29-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you Yvette!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Startling imagery--very clever personification--Cold as a stalker!--apt and powerful description of tundra--stunning close--existence measured in moments.
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Startling imagery--very clever personification--Cold as a stalker!--apt and powerful description of tundra--stunning close--existence measured in moments.
Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from rama devi
compelling post! I love the imagery and presentation as well as the surprise of the AHA in the closing. Thought provoking! Also, good flow and fine phonics in phrasing, especially all the S and M sounds. I enjoyed the opening personification of COLD stalking, thus making the title make sense.
A great entry. Good luck!
Warmly,
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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compelling post! I love the imagery and presentation as well as the surprise of the AHA in the closing. Thought provoking! Also, good flow and fine phonics in phrasing, especially all the S and M sounds. I enjoyed the opening personification of COLD stalking, thus making the title make sense.
A great entry. Good luck!
Warmly,
rd
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from equestrik
What a starkly cold land you wrote about here. You chose a stunning picture to go with your descriptive and well written naani. Best to you in the contest.
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reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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What a starkly cold land you wrote about here. You chose a stunning picture to go with your descriptive and well written naani. Best to you in the contest.
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Comment Written 28-Oct-2020
reply by the author on 29-Oct-2020
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Thank you.
