Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

A great job creating this story in verse! I like how you created such suspense and worry about how safe the potentially explosive package is to open. It seems the last stanza shows an optimistic future.

 Comment Written 31-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020

Thank you for the Time to Read and Review this poem. God's Blessings to you.

Comment from Iza Deleanu

Excellent

And that is how it begins:"th last minute worries I tuxedo up in a hurry,
My x-ray vision better be focused on our future!
While Hoping minutes and hours fly by in a flurry,
Till we say our "I Do's" and ring in the box acts as a suture" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020

Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem offering. Blessings to you.

Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

LOL!! Oh, you certainly had a good time with this one - wow!! ;) Good rhyme scheme throughout -- thanx for the smile!! ;)

Mortalities collision --> Mortality's collision

 Comment Written 30-Oct-2020

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reply by the author on 31-Oct-2020

Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate, and Review this poem. Blessings to you and Thanks for the corrections.