Heart Cafted Poems - 2020
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Comment from Jasmine Girl
OK. This is a Fabulous Free Verse so no meter writing is required. You are off the hook.
This is a very deep verse. I think you mean that we should surrender to our spirit and let it guide us. I like the following lines:
Then, drink deeply
from the calm waters
of your lifestream
and live into your
fullest and highest abilities.
This is why I'm learning how to write poetry.
Well done.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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OK. This is a Fabulous Free Verse so no meter writing is required. You are off the hook.
This is a very deep verse. I think you mean that we should surrender to our spirit and let it guide us. I like the following lines:
Then, drink deeply
from the calm waters
of your lifestream
and live into your
fullest and highest abilities.
This is why I'm learning how to write poetry.
Well done.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Lisa, yes that is what my intention is. thank you very much!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Awakening your Divine Potential
Sacred Contracts
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
Awesome poem entry for the Free Verse event in The Fabulous Free Versers Club challenge. I love the word imagery and the beautiful gif picture. I agree with you in a spiritual level. You name great teachers.
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Awakening your Divine Potential
Sacred Contracts
by JLR
Hello, my friend,
Awesome poem entry for the Free Verse event in The Fabulous Free Versers Club challenge. I love the word imagery and the beautiful gif picture. I agree with you in a spiritual level. You name great teachers.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Gypsy Blue Rose, thank you! Any yet, there are still so many more Wisdom treachers to dip my toe into there calm waters.
Comment from harmony13
The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I really
liked the definition of surrender conveyed in the author's words. The
book you chose is from a favorite author of mine. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect. Have a great day!....Maria
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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The author's words are engaging, interesting, clear and creative. I really
liked the definition of surrender conveyed in the author's words. The
book you chose is from a favorite author of mine. The poem flows and
connects well. The artwork is perfect. Have a great day!....Maria
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 04-Nov-2020
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Maria, you then would be on a Spiritual journey yourself, thanks for your wonderful and kind review and comments
Comment from Mary Vigasin
This is a well written poem with an excellent message to those of us who are bound by material things or stuck in our own dogmas and not exploring paths that will lead to other views.
I enjoyed the read and its message.
Regards,
Mary
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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This is a well written poem with an excellent message to those of us who are bound by material things or stuck in our own dogmas and not exploring paths that will lead to other views.
I enjoyed the read and its message.
Regards,
Mary
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Mary thanks for taking the time to read and comment on my free verse poem.
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
What an interesting poem for the Free Verse Challenge. I have no poetic juices, but I do appreciate the work of those who do have this talent/gift. Beautifully done!
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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What an interesting poem for the Free Verse Challenge. I have no poetic juices, but I do appreciate the work of those who do have this talent/gift. Beautifully done!
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Rebecca, thank you, I appreciate your validating my free verse
Comment from lyenochka
Interesting how you started and ended with that quote. I never read "Sacred Contracts." It sounds like it explores spirituality in an ecumenical manner. Was it a good book? What did you think? I guess you gave us a good summary in your poem.
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Interesting how you started and ended with that quote. I never read "Sacred Contracts." It sounds like it explores spirituality in an ecumenical manner. Was it a good book? What did you think? I guess you gave us a good summary in your poem.
Comment Written 03-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 03-Nov-2020
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Yes I have found that the book provided much incite onto paths to help one go deep into the philosophy of what our reason for our Beingness. Caroline Myss has written many sound books about our faith and journey on this earth plane.
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Thank you for sharing about her.
Comment from royowen
There's a Christian song that was used many times when I was a young Christian called "I surrender all" at least the message was a really good one and the theme is still as fresh as it was then, God once responded to a question I proffered to Him. I asked,"What do you want me to do?" The reply was. "Find a hole and fill it." Two weeks later a member of the church cleaning team died, I still serve on the cleaning team, all these years down the track.Well done, great post, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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There's a Christian song that was used many times when I was a young Christian called "I surrender all" at least the message was a really good one and the theme is still as fresh as it was then, God once responded to a question I proffered to Him. I asked,"What do you want me to do?" The reply was. "Find a hole and fill it." Two weeks later a member of the church cleaning team died, I still serve on the cleaning team, all these years down the track.Well done, great post, blessings Roy
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Wow~ we do get some powerful messages...if we just listen and Trust. Thanks for sharing this insight. Best regards, J
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Well done
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written free verse poem about the sacred contracts we make with our master who is the higher entity in our lives. We surrender and follow the rules and commands.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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A very well-written free verse poem about the sacred contracts we make with our master who is the higher entity in our lives. We surrender and follow the rules and commands.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Sandra, I do appreciate your review and comments.
Comment from Janet Foor
Certainly is an interesting challenge and I think you met the challenge beautifully. Excellent artwork to compliment your well crafted poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Certainly is an interesting challenge and I think you met the challenge beautifully. Excellent artwork to compliment your well crafted poem.
Well done.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Janet, thank you!
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
We are not supposed to give six to a challenge but I have to give this one a six. It is perfectly described and excellently written as a free verse, message delivered and one I wish everyone would read.
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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We are not supposed to give six to a challenge but I have to give this one a six. It is perfectly described and excellently written as a free verse, message delivered and one I wish everyone would read.
Comment Written 02-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 02-Nov-2020
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Bsrb, I am so very honored for this unexpected gift. Thank you!
