Vortex
a 2-10-2 poetic form contest15 total reviews
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Jam-packed with power! Sugg: continue pattern of unmodified verbs throughout (stronger without adj. ) in line with writhing ... (churning/swirling/raging etc.--then end with the noun twister as you have--i.e. the preceding verbs are characteristics of the twister.
I'm honored you took my suggestion!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Jam-packed with power! Sugg: continue pattern of unmodified verbs throughout (stronger without adj. ) in line with writhing ... (churning/swirling/raging etc.--then end with the noun twister as you have--i.e. the preceding verbs are characteristics of the twister.
I'm honored you took my suggestion!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you.. I took your suggestion to heart and reformatted. It became stronger, in my opinion. :).
Comment from equestrik
This is a good descriptive write for the contest and I thin it should do well. You picture choice is perfect for your writing. Best of luck to you in the upcoming contest.
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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This is a good descriptive write for the contest and I thin it should do well. You picture choice is perfect for your writing. Best of luck to you in the upcoming contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you.
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is Excellent writing for 2-10-2 contest. Very Awesome descriptive words. Quite nicely done. I Love your photo very interesting. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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This is Excellent writing for 2-10-2 contest. Very Awesome descriptive words. Quite nicely done. I Love your photo very interesting. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Joanne!
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, no image was necessary at all with this write - the words captured the storm realistically and articulately to perfection, in full compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest.
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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In my opinion, no image was necessary at all with this write - the words captured the storm realistically and articulately to perfection, in full compliance with the prompt. Best wishes in the contest.
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you Eve!
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You are very welcome, Melissa, a stunning write...Eve
Comment from RodG
A great combo of picture and poem in this 2-10-2.
Your use of verbals makes it easy to both visualize and hear this twister. Good luck in this contest. Rod
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reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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A great combo of picture and poem in this 2-10-2.
Your use of verbals makes it easy to both visualize and hear this twister. Good luck in this contest. Rod
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Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 08-Nov-2020
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Thank you Rod!
