Melodic Memories
Reminds Me Of Mom9 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Oh music has a habit of touching our memory and bring back those special scenes from the past. Your Mum had good taste in music here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Oh music has a habit of touching our memory and bring back those special scenes from the past. Your Mum had good taste in music here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 13-Nov-2020
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Thank you fot this great review.....it's really appreciated. :)
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 3-6-9 Music Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. I like the presentation.
I love the moonlight sonata..
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Hello, anonymous,
Excellent entry for the 3-6-9 Music Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It flows nicely. I like the presentation.
I love the moonlight sonata..
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thanks for reading, it's always good to here from you. :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 3-6-9 Poem about music that we can enjoy in so many ways, especially just listening us extremely relaxing and soothing to the soul. If we can play an instrument it is even more soothing.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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A very well-written 3-6-9 Poem about music that we can enjoy in so many ways, especially just listening us extremely relaxing and soothing to the soul. If we can play an instrument it is even more soothing.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thanks so much for reading, I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from equestrik
This is a beautiful and sensitive presentation for the 3-6-3 Music Poetry prompt. Your picture as well as your words have class and speak to how music evokes memories and gives us comfort.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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This is a beautiful and sensitive presentation for the 3-6-3 Music Poetry prompt. Your picture as well as your words have class and speak to how music evokes memories and gives us comfort.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this great review...I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
You have used several literary techniques. Your allusion will draw the reader in. Your alliteration is rhythmic. The s's may be the sound of the breath drawn in at the beauty striking their ears and of the peacefulness. The m's create the sound of smoothness. This was fun.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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You have used several literary techniques. Your allusion will draw the reader in. Your alliteration is rhythmic. The s's may be the sound of the breath drawn in at the beauty striking their ears and of the peacefulness. The m's create the sound of smoothness. This was fun.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you, for this very nice review. :)
Comment from George Santhosh
Thanks for sharing your musical nostalgia :) A sweet dedication to your mom too I believe.
Here are a few possible corrections:
* brings her back, every -> Comma not required
* piano sonata's -> sonatas
Hope it was helpful. Keep writing. Cheers,
George
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thanks for sharing your musical nostalgia :) A sweet dedication to your mom too I believe.
Here are a few possible corrections:
* brings her back, every -> Comma not required
* piano sonata's -> sonatas
Hope it was helpful. Keep writing. Cheers,
George
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this nice review and the helpful suggestions. :)
Comment from Pantygynt
And who played the flute? It think that other instrument is a flute, isn't it? My only query is Am-a-de-us? Four syllables in my pronunciation. I imagine you are combining my last to syllables to rhyme with 'juice' but I have never heard it said that way. A case of benefit of the doubt I think.
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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And who played the flute? It think that other instrument is a flute, isn't it? My only query is Am-a-de-us? Four syllables in my pronunciation. I imagine you are combining my last to syllables to rhyme with 'juice' but I have never heard it said that way. A case of benefit of the doubt I think.
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 12-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reading. :)
Comment from Carmen Ducharme
What a beautiful story and a beautifully written 3 /6 / 9 poem .All memories of our mothers dancing is a fond memory to me .God Bless you and the wonderful memories of your Mom !
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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What a beautiful story and a beautifully written 3 /6 / 9 poem .All memories of our mothers dancing is a fond memory to me .God Bless you and the wonderful memories of your Mom !
Comment Written 09-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was terrific. I think the third stanza was by far my favorite. The connection you share between music and your mother was wonderful. The other stanzas weren't as personal so didn't have the same "punch". Great job!
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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I thought this was terrific. I think the third stanza was by far my favorite. The connection you share between music and your mother was wonderful. The other stanzas weren't as personal so didn't have the same "punch". Great job!
Comment Written 08-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 09-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this great review. :)
