haiku (midnight rendezvous)
A haiku for the contest16 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These romantic birds are enjoying a romantic encounter it seems and they are also blushing! He he he, did you know they have pink feathers because of the fish they eat! A fine romantic write June, love Dolly x
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These romantic birds are enjoying a romantic encounter it seems and they are also blushing! He he he, did you know they have pink feathers because of the fish they eat! A fine romantic write June, love Dolly x
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Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts in this piece! Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written haiku about the moonlight reflections that bring forth a nest full of eggs that will ensure the continuation of the species who laid the eggs for the future.
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A very well-written haiku about the moonlight reflections that bring forth a nest full of eggs that will ensure the continuation of the species who laid the eggs for the future.
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Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts in this piece! Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from M. Meraki
This piece is really a great example of the style and I really enjoyed the subject you employed as well! The picture provided a good pairing. Best of luck in the contest!
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This piece is really a great example of the style and I really enjoyed the subject you employed as well! The picture provided a good pairing. Best of luck in the contest!
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Thank you for sharing your positive thoughts in this piece! Glad you enjoyed the read.
Comment from royowen
We do tend to judge animals by their propensity to have either human characteristics of human "qualitiesl or foibles. This is a great entry in this contest, June, good luck, blessings Roy
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We do tend to judge animals by their propensity to have either human characteristics of human "qualitiesl or foibles. This is a great entry in this contest, June, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 12-Nov-2020
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Well done
Comment from Iza Deleanu
What a lovely picture and poem: "moonlight reflections
of deep love and devotion -
a nest full of eggs" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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What a lovely picture and poem: "moonlight reflections
of deep love and devotion -
a nest full of eggs" Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
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Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Lovely and so fresh--a clever touch of whimsy with the unexpected ending. Sugg: devotion suffices sans "love and"--put those 2 sylls to better use--also, take full advantage of free space of title/desc rather than say haiku contest--that info is automatically provided below poem.
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Lovely and so fresh--a clever touch of whimsy with the unexpected ending. Sugg: devotion suffices sans "love and"--put those 2 sylls to better use--also, take full advantage of free space of title/desc rather than say haiku contest--that info is automatically provided below poem.
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Comment Written 11-Nov-2020
