Bedroom With a View
5/7/5 poem for contest12 total reviews
Comment from Becky Kern-Taylor
Very beautiful, poem and picture. I love your work and follow you all the time. I also love all your information about various types of poetry. This work is outstanding, you deserve the results.
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Very beautiful, poem and picture. I love your work and follow you all the time. I also love all your information about various types of poetry. This work is outstanding, you deserve the results.
Comment Written 23-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 23-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs,
Gypsy
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This is very good. I like the metaphor. It reminds of my friend's bedroom with a view. Hers was not as ethereal, nevertheless, a view. Their bedroom was directly across from a drive-in theater. Fortunately, the screen was facing them. The only thing they were missing was the sound. Some drive-ins have been revitalized since Covid. Sadly this one has just slowly fallen apart.
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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This is very good. I like the metaphor. It reminds of my friend's bedroom with a view. Hers was not as ethereal, nevertheless, a view. Their bedroom was directly across from a drive-in theater. Fortunately, the screen was facing them. The only thing they were missing was the sound. Some drive-ins have been revitalized since Covid. Sadly this one has just slowly fallen apart.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 22-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Hugs
Gypsy
Comment from Mia Twysted
I love the last line in this piece, "bedroom with a view." It speaks so much and defines the image for the reader.
I wish you the best of luck.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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I love the last line in this piece, "bedroom with a view." It speaks so much and defines the image for the reader.
I wish you the best of luck.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Carlos' girl
there is something about this poem, it really does stand out. it has a simple eloquence that captures an experience and feelings we can immediately identify, in other words, it is widely understood by readers. this is the sign of a great poem
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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there is something about this poem, it really does stand out. it has a simple eloquence that captures an experience and feelings we can immediately identify, in other words, it is widely understood by readers. this is the sign of a great poem
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
What beauty in an image. We do open our curtains and look out the window, take in the view, when we are on vacation. To see the sunrise is the most gorgeous scene ever created. It is God's creation.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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What beauty in an image. We do open our curtains and look out the window, take in the view, when we are on vacation. To see the sunrise is the most gorgeous scene ever created. It is God's creation.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about waking up with a view of the sun rising is an awesome way to start every morning with that scene in your mind for the rest of the day.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about waking up with a view of the sun rising is an awesome way to start every morning with that scene in your mind for the rest of the day.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from jaded831
Nothing like waking up on a beautiful morning. Especially in winter when you feel safe and warm gazing out a window to a winter wonderland. Your picture compliments your words. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Nothing like waking up on a beautiful morning. Especially in winter when you feel safe and warm gazing out a window to a winter wonderland. Your picture compliments your words. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much
Comment from Mrs. KT
Ah! That would do it, Mystery Writer!
I wouldn't want to leave my bedroom with a view like that!
I, too, would feel "blessed and elated!"
Well-crafted!
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Ah! That would do it, Mystery Writer!
I wouldn't want to leave my bedroom with a view like that!
I, too, would feel "blessed and elated!"
Well-crafted!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Lovely image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
creates a positive and
peaceful feeling, viewing
the sunrise from the window.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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-Lovely image and
nice presentation.
-The syllable count
is good, along with the topic.
-Effective imagery that
creates a positive and
peaceful feeling, viewing
the sunrise from the window.
-Well done; good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
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You are quite welcome.
Comment from roof35
You followed the rules and penned an absolutely lovely poem for the contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words.
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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You followed the rules and penned an absolutely lovely poem for the contest. Your illustration, of course, pairs perfectly and sets the stage for your words.
Comment Written 19-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 20-Nov-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
