Christmas Lights
Brings us joy13 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
A delightfully cheery offering for the acrostic here with promises of happy holidays just around the corner! ;) Thanx for such an uplift to the spirits here and best of luck in the contest! ;)
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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A delightfully cheery offering for the acrostic here with promises of happy holidays just around the corner! ;) Thanx for such an uplift to the spirits here and best of luck in the contest! ;)
Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review. I hope Christmas brings joy to everyone....we NEED it. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
Very good. Around here everyone is putting up their Christmas lights early to bring some cheer into our world. Surely the do add some colour and encouragement at this time.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Very good. Around here everyone is putting up their Christmas lights early to bring some cheer into our world. Surely the do add some colour and encouragement at this time.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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That's wonderful. We meant to put ours up early, but too late! Winter has arrived. Oh, well. Thanks do much for reading.
Comment from HarryT
Very nice work. My only problem is the line with blue and white lights. I believe blue and white are the colors for the Jewish celebration of Chanukah. Don't know if this was intentional to show a mixing of the holidays, but it took me out of the poem.
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reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Very nice work. My only problem is the line with blue and white lights. I believe blue and white are the colors for the Jewish celebration of Chanukah. Don't know if this was intentional to show a mixing of the holidays, but it took me out of the poem.
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Comment Written 15-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 15-Nov-2020
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Thank you for pointing that out, I had no idea. I just happen to like the color blue, but I changed it to red. I really appreciate you reading my poem and helping me out the way you did. Thanks again. :)
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You are welcome. Good work.
