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Bumfuzzled

I'll leave it to you to sort the whole thing out...

16 total reviews 
Comment from Jasmine Girl
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I can't sort this out like you which is why you have to take off for a few days to untangle this mess. Thank you for teaching me a word: Bumfuzzled, which looks like a Bumble Bee if you write it vertically.

Well done and hope you will sort it out soon.

 Comment Written 18-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
    It was certainly a jumble of fun to just write a bit of nonsense -- glad you enjoyed, my lady!! ;) Thanx for the review! ;) Yvette
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
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"Bumfuzzled", is an extremely well-written, and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. Good luck with the contest!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
    Saw the word and just had to use it! Thank you for your review.
reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-Nov-2020

    Yvette,
    It would've been a shame to have wasted it.
    God bless you, take care and stay safe!
    the Duchess
Comment from Mia Twysted
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This piece makes me think about how things have become different. They are not the same and my grandson is going to grow up in a world totally different from the one I knew.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Ran across the word and just had to use it... I do believe you are one of the few who actually saw the meanings woven in there... Thank you for your review.
Comment from Eternal Muse
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This was a witty and creative acrostic; I liked your imagery and visuals; and the originality of it. Magnificent artistic presentation and artwork.

I believe this will do very well in the contest - good luck in the booths.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Saw this word and just had to use it! Thank you for stopping in for the review.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Hello, anonymous,

Good entry for the Acrostic Poetry writing prompt contest. Not all the words that start with the letter that forms the title make sense...bad syntaxt. The topic is confusing. I read it twice and still I don't understand it.

Good luck in the contest.

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 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Oh my goodness, Mystery Writer!
Hmmm...political commentary? Satire? Stream of consciousness?
Read this delightful offering three times, and I know what it means to me, but ... I'm keeping it a secret between Aunty Em and moi! So there!

Acrostic, eh? @#!#@#@$@$@$$ :) :) :)

Best Wishes!
diane

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Saw the word and just HAD to use it... and what better way than... ##@#$%^%!! ;) :) Thanx for your review, my lady!
reply by Mrs. KT on 16-Nov-2020
    One of these days, Mystery Writer, I shall meet the GREAT ACROSTIC WIZARD, and by my pen he shall be defeated! :) :)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written acrostic about the world around us seem to be in chaos and leave everyone who try to make sense of all the stuff but get more Bumfuzzled every minute of the day.

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Lol! Ran across the word, Sandra, and just had to use it. Thanks so much for your review here!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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I was a bit befuddled by your write and tried sorting it out but got lost along the way, perhaps this is about riots and unhappy campers, we cannot please all of the people all of the time, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Lol! Ran across the word, Dolly, and just had to use it. Thanks so much for your review here!
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Poet,

I liked the topic of your acrostic, but admit, I have a problem sorting it all out. -- Obviously, your objective. I can actually see your words fitting both sides. *smile*

My only negative comment is that the color of the words is really hard to see and read - there's a 'glow' that clouds the vision. Just a thought.

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    All fixed. 8-) Ran across the word and just had to use it. Thanks so much for your review here!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This acrostic poem speaks a tale about state of confusing matter of decision making when life is before fires at two sides; you have to take your own decision; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 16-Nov-2020


reply by the author on 16-Nov-2020
    Ran across the word and just had to use it. Thanks so much for your review here!