The Queen's Love
Wizard contest entry14 total reviews
Comment from Jessica M Lee
You did a great job with this one. The rhythm of your poem flowed smooth as a steady brook. An interesting outcome, I must say. Well written and good luck in the contest:)
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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You did a great job with this one. The rhythm of your poem flowed smooth as a steady brook. An interesting outcome, I must say. Well written and good luck in the contest:)
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the great review, Jessica. I really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece.
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Ron
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Thank you for sharing:)
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
This may well be a winner! Lush with--graphic!--imagery--delightfully clever story masterfully relayed in flawless rhythm and fine rhyme--perfect punchline!
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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This may well be a winner! Lush with--graphic!--imagery--delightfully clever story masterfully relayed in flawless rhythm and fine rhyme--perfect punchline!
Comment Written 18-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the fantastic review, Elizabeth. I have to admit when I started the piece I really didn't have an ending in mind. But I just went with the flow and this is what came out. lol I really appreciate the gracious and kind comments. I hope you have yourself a wonderful day.
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Ron
Comment from Wendy G
To the mystery writer,
This is brilliant. So well thought through, with a great story, very engaging. It flows well, it rhymes well, and is worthy of being published in a children's book, if it hasn't already been. Congratulations.
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reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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To the mystery writer,
This is brilliant. So well thought through, with a great story, very engaging. It flows well, it rhymes well, and is worthy of being published in a children's book, if it hasn't already been. Congratulations.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 19-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the awesome review, Wendy. I really just had the premise in mind when I began but didn't have it thought out all the through. I just went with the flow and this is what came out. lol No, hasn't been published anywhere yet but I mostly just do this for fun. Really appreciate the gracious stars and kind comments. I'm glad you liked the piece. Have yourself a wonderful day.
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Ron
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written fantasy story about the wizard who saves his lover and the kingdom to rule with his queen when the king is dead. The wizard, the queen, and their kingdom life happily ever after.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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A very well-written fantasy story about the wizard who saves his lover and the kingdom to rule with his queen when the king is dead. The wizard, the queen, and their kingdom life happily ever after.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the great review, Sandra. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked my little tale.
