Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 79 "The Family Together Again"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Mistydawn
I'm so glad the kids are doing good and you can see them often. It's funny how you and hubby think so much alike though. My husband and I are starting to that and it's scary. It'll be interesting to see how Don and Ce ce works out. Future wife maybe? guess I have to read on and find out. Your story is well-written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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I'm so glad the kids are doing good and you can see them often. It's funny how you and hubby think so much alike though. My husband and I are starting to that and it's scary. It'll be interesting to see how Don and Ce ce works out. Future wife maybe? guess I have to read on and find out. Your story is well-written, interesting. I look forward to reading more.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. It is a little eerie when it happens so often as it did with us. I've been fortunate to always able to see my children. Even today, I see them all every week because they all live near me.
Beth
Comment from AnnieDawn
This is a novel way of writing memoirs and if to your children, it should carry very well. I am sure they will be able to relate to the times that you mention them in your story as well. Great job and I do not find anything to suggest for correction.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This is a novel way of writing memoirs and if to your children, it should carry very well. I am sure they will be able to relate to the times that you mention them in your story as well. Great job and I do not find anything to suggest for correction.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you Annie, I appreciate the review and nice comments. I glad you stopped my to read some of my story.
Beth
Comment from Anne Johnston
What a wonderful way to remember your husband and to leave record of those memories for your children. You have a way with words, and make it easy for the reader to picture what life was like at your house.
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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What a wonderful way to remember your husband and to leave record of those memories for your children. You have a way with words, and make it easy for the reader to picture what life was like at your house.
Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and wonderful comments. I appreciate you stopping by to read a bit of my life. I hope you'll stop by again.
Beth
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Beth, The most interesting thing talked about in this chapter was this ESP between you and your husband. ( It happened only rarely between my parents and it usually involved needing to Call the other on the phone to check on something. ) With you with you and Evan, the number of times it happened, it sounds very very unusual indeed!
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Dear Beth, The most interesting thing talked about in this chapter was this ESP between you and your husband. ( It happened only rarely between my parents and it usually involved needing to Call the other on the phone to check on something. ) With you with you and Evan, the number of times it happened, it sounds very very unusual indeed!
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. It was almost spooky that kept happening all the time. I've had bond with other people where I would call someone out of the blue and find them on the line trying to call me. Still the thing with the same purchases never ceased to amaze us.
Beth
Comment from Jay Squires
This was such a lovely chapter, Beth. I especially loved the psychic bond you had with your husband and the way you duplicated each other's purchases. The examples you gave were made me a believer.
I could only find one thing, and it was a fluke:
we celebrated the main day with them which made unfortunately made work for our parents. [one too many "made"]
I really wish I had a 6 to give for this chapter. It was so "clean" and packed with information.
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reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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This was such a lovely chapter, Beth. I especially loved the psychic bond you had with your husband and the way you duplicated each other's purchases. The examples you gave were made me a believer.
I could only find one thing, and it was a fluke:
we celebrated the main day with them which made unfortunately made work for our parents. [one too many "made"]
I really wish I had a 6 to give for this chapter. It was so "clean" and packed with information.
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Comment Written 17-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 17-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for your review. I really enjoy your flattering comments about my writing and I appreciate you pointing out errors you see. I'm pleased witht the virtual six.
Beth
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Yes, I think I mentioned it before, but you have a warmth in your writing that is hard for a new writer to learn. Don't lose it.
