Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 80 "To Graduate or Not to Graduate"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from royowen
That would have been a big deal if Christi hadn't received her high school diploma for a small prank on the boys, I've heard of worse things before, but a whole year away from home, would have been wasted. Well done Beth, thanks for sharing, blessings Roy
Typos : For some unknown (for) reason 2: We (was) relieved. We're?
We were (arraigning) deciding? 4 : (until) you were planning to come. unless?
5: if you don't get you(r) diploma 6: see if we can (get) things sorted out.
7 : and we heard (mummers) murmurs?
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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That would have been a big deal if Christi hadn't received her high school diploma for a small prank on the boys, I've heard of worse things before, but a whole year away from home, would have been wasted. Well done Beth, thanks for sharing, blessings Roy
Typos : For some unknown (for) reason 2: We (was) relieved. We're?
We were (arraigning) deciding? 4 : (until) you were planning to come. unless?
5: if you don't get you(r) diploma 6: see if we can (get) things sorted out.
7 : and we heard (mummers) murmurs?
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much Roy. I appreciate the comments. I usually have my daughter read this for errors but she was out of town. I have a hard time seeing them all. Thanks for you help
Beth
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My pleasure Beth.
Comment from Suzanna Ray
Dear Beth, this chapter really reflects how individual each of your children really are! Sometimes you wonder where their spirits came from, but I think you know that God gave them to you for a purpose.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Dear Beth, this chapter really reflects how individual each of your children really are! Sometimes you wonder where their spirits came from, but I think you know that God gave them to you for a purpose.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. Yes, they did try to give us some gray hairs, but we can laugh about it now.
Beth
Comment from Anne Johnston
Another great post on the memories you have experienced. I could sympathize with you about your daughter not wanting to know you were visiting a discount store. My son was very embarrassed one day when I went into a Woolworth store and he was afraid his friends might see me. Reading your posts makes me want to write down some of my memories.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Another great post on the memories you have experienced. I could sympathize with you about your daughter not wanting to know you were visiting a discount store. My son was very embarrassed one day when I went into a Woolworth store and he was afraid his friends might see me. Reading your posts makes me want to write down some of my memories.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for reviewing and commenting on this. I see I was alone embarrassing my fashion conscious Kid. I think you should write down your memories. My kids are thrilled that I am doing this. There's a lot they had forgotten.
Beth
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I love the gall Christi had in doing two pranks right at graduation time. She has spunk! ha ha
Noticed three typos:
Sometimes we would go Audubon Park and take Connie to (the) zoo, or to (the) City Park where there was a petting zoo and playground equipment.
I talked to you about it, and we decided to let her stay with his family, unto (until) we went to school for the Class Night program.
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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I love the gall Christi had in doing two pranks right at graduation time. She has spunk! ha ha
Noticed three typos:
Sometimes we would go Audubon Park and take Connie to (the) zoo, or to (the) City Park where there was a petting zoo and playground equipment.
I talked to you about it, and we decided to let her stay with his family, unto (until) we went to school for the Class Night program.
Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and comment. Christi did have gall. I didn't find it funny at the time, but can laugh now Thank you for catching those typoes.
Beth
Comment from Mistydawn
That was a close call. I'm just glad it all worked out. I agree with the guy, they were just overreacting. I'm glad she got to see her brother perform. Little Connie is growing up it seems; sticking up for her friend the way she did. Hopefully, you can find a way to satisfy her expensive taste. It's well-written, very interesting. I did find one thing you might want to look at.
unto we went to school for the Class Night program.
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reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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That was a close call. I'm just glad it all worked out. I agree with the guy, they were just overreacting. I'm glad she got to see her brother perform. Little Connie is growing up it seems; sticking up for her friend the way she did. Hopefully, you can find a way to satisfy her expensive taste. It's well-written, very interesting. I did find one thing you might want to look at.
unto we went to school for the Class Night program.
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and comments. I'm glad you caught that typo. Thanks again.
Beth
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I'm doing the google map thing on Atlanta. Don't know how I managed but I ended up in a public restroom. It was very colorful, interesting. It was definitely different from what I normally see. I found an underground city too. That was different. It was like a complete city all in itself.
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I've been to Atlanta's underground city. They used to have a lot of shops and interesting things there. The last time I was there it was pretty empty and scarry. That is funny ending up in a restroom. LOL
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Guess I needed a virtual bathroom break, lol. That's a shame about the city. Have you been to Olympic Centennial park? Decatur looks like a cute place to visit. It seems to have a historic vibe to it. I might have to go to Georgia someday.
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I haven't been to Centennial park. I would like to go there. You need to visit Georgia if you are writing about it. You are doing a good job of making it should like you've been there.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
It's amazing kids ever grow up and become responsible adults. Thank you for sharing.
"YOU WENT IN GUY'S ROOM" ARE YOU CRAZY? NO WONDER THEY WANT TO EXPEL YOU!! (I'm wondering if the ending quotation mark is in the wrong place.)
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It's amazing kids ever grow up and become responsible adults. Thank you for sharing.
"YOU WENT IN GUY'S ROOM" ARE YOU CRAZY? NO WONDER THEY WANT TO EXPEL YOU!! (I'm wondering if the ending quotation mark is in the wrong place.)
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Comment Written 21-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 21-Nov-2020
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Thank you for the review and comments. You are right. I did misplace the quotes. I appreciate you catching that.
Beth
