Remembering Yesterday
Viewing comments for Chapter 81 "Summer and Fall of 1980"A widow's journey into her relationship with her
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This Chapter of your biographical non-fiction, you have written this draft to show your children about your family life; I like and have enjoyed the read of this structured work chronologically; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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This Chapter of your biographical non-fiction, you have written this draft to show your children about your family life; I like and have enjoyed the read of this structured work chronologically; well said, well done; thanks for sharing this. ALCREATOR
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you so much for the review and nice comments.
Beth
Comment from Ben Colder
Out of six, I enjoyed reading your story concerning your family and the days of yesteryear. It touches on several private memories as well.
My best to you and thanks for sharing your days.
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Out of six, I enjoyed reading your story concerning your family and the days of yesteryear. It touches on several private memories as well.
My best to you and thanks for sharing your days.
Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you Ben, I'm always pleased that you seem to like my story. I'm sure there are things that are similar things in all parenting stories. I hope you going to be putting the second book of your story on soon.
Beth
Comment from royowen
I love the way your story is tracking the American story also, it seems to me that all parents struggle with their kids complicated lives in their latter terms, and wresting with their own core beliefs, it helps if the parented let them, allowing and trusting God for the rest, which it seems to me you did. Well done, Beth , an excellent job, blessings Roy
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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I love the way your story is tracking the American story also, it seems to me that all parents struggle with their kids complicated lives in their latter terms, and wresting with their own core beliefs, it helps if the parented let them, allowing and trusting God for the rest, which it seems to me you did. Well done, Beth , an excellent job, blessings Roy
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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I'm glad you are getting notices now and you are reviewing my story. I enjoy reading your comments. We didn't know if we were doing the right things but we did pray about it.
Beth
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Yes, it?s tough being parents, fortunately our kids were good
Comment from thaities, Rebecca V.
I find it very enjoyable moving along in your life through your writings.
Noticed a typo:
Unable to care of (for) a baby, she had placed him on the steps of a orphanage.
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reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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I find it very enjoyable moving along in your life through your writings.
Noticed a typo:
Unable to care of (for) a baby, she had placed him on the steps of a orphanage.
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Comment Written 24-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 24-Nov-2020
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Thank you Rebecca. I appreciate people like you who faithfully review my story as I post it. Thanks for noticing the typo.
Beth
