I Hate Being Old
For those who are feeling their age.23 total reviews
Comment from Jay Squires
This is a clever, well-written poem. I was also impressed by how well you kept the tempo tapping right along. I wish you well in the contest. I'm sure the judges will look kindly on it... unless they happen to be old and grouchy.
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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This is a clever, well-written poem. I was also impressed by how well you kept the tempo tapping right along. I wish you well in the contest. I'm sure the judges will look kindly on it... unless they happen to be old and grouchy.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Thank you, Jay, for sharing my poem and your most encouraging comments.
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
What a spunky and charming piece! It's so truthful that it can't help but make the reader smile with recognition. We all relate to getting older. The picture you chose is a delight! Well done!
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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What a spunky and charming piece! It's so truthful that it can't help but make the reader smile with recognition. We all relate to getting older. The picture you chose is a delight! Well done!
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Well, you put a smile on my face today. I am delighted you found my poem "spunky and charming." Many thanks for sharing.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Darkly humorous and clever take on the betrayal theme--an original entry for the contest--which I expect will be rife with tales of emotional devastation. Hope the judges will appreciate the levity!
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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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Darkly humorous and clever take on the betrayal theme--an original entry for the contest--which I expect will be rife with tales of emotional devastation. Hope the judges will appreciate the levity!
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2020
reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020
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I am delighted YOU--and hopefully the judges--appreciated the dark humor in my poem, Elizabeth. Many thanks for sharing.
