Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written heartfelt 1-6-1 poem about the many factors that lead to so many people who don't have enough money to get through the month the cupboards are bare and the pockets are empty.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. :)

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Good entry into this contest, author. You used all the right words to illustrate the horrible feeling of not having any money to pay for food.

Written to specs and I wish you much luck in the voting booth. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 30-Nov-2020

Thank you for this great review. :)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is true for so many--esp now with the virus crisis. Good job with the contest prompt. Your image is a good pairing with your words. Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you for reading my poem, I really appreciate it. :)

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

good job i have seen over 4 contest entry's of 1-6-1 there good i dont know who im voting for though but any way stay safe and keep writing


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you, you stay safe too. :)

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

I am sure many can relate. Very simply expressed, and with just the right accompanying picture. This is also a social commentary, perhaps heightened by the last year.

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thanks for reading, I'm broke right now so this was very appropriate. Thanks again for reading. :)

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 1-6-1 poem for the contest
with good social commentary.
Good use of the three rhymes and exact syllables.
Interesting art work to match.
Nicely done.
Best wishes.
Robert

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thank you for reading and for your excellent comments. :)

Comment from Susan X Smith

Excellent

This is a timely piece which could very well apply to the pandemic situation. It certainly fits the specifications required for the contest. The picture is a cute addition.

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 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thanks, I appreciate you reading my poem. :)