Comment from sammielwf

Excellent

Tear definitely tickled my funny bone- maybe it is because I will simply go out and buy a new pair of anything rather than try to see it. Needles and I do not get along at all...it usually goes By The Pricking of My This(fingers) if I attempt a needle and thread fix. Interesting write.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2020

Comment from Rosemary Everson1

Excellent

This is quite a cute poem. It's true when you split your jeans; you must sew the tear. To sew them is not the easiest thing to do unless you have a sewing machine that does make stitches.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2020

Comment from greyson ernst

Excellent

nice but what does glitches and stitches but any way it rhymes good luck in the contests and as always keep writing and stay safe


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020

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reply by the author on 29-Nov-2020

Thanks for your review and stars, but I don't understand your question, ("but what does glitches and stars"....)

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your humorous contest entry. Your image choice and well=chosen words pair nicely. I like the end rhymes, too. {Maybe use the word 'so' instead of too since you used into--or maybe not.] Thanks for sharing and best wishes.
Respectfully, Jan

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2020