Airing a Grievance
3-5-3 'Air' poem2 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
This is a clever and witty poem, playing on the double meaning of 'prick', and 'point' for bursting a bubble, filled with air. The illustration is perfect to accompany it. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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This is a clever and witty poem, playing on the double meaning of 'prick', and 'point' for bursting a bubble, filled with air. The illustration is perfect to accompany it. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reviewing this lightweight bit of fun.
Comment from Bloomer Burbs
Excellent, brilliant I say. I love your alternative and humorous twist on a poem about wind and air that blows all around us; balloons thrive on the stuff, LOL.
A very penetrating last line I might add!
Delightful and full of mischief. Hooray
Take care and stay safe, Pete
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Excellent, brilliant I say. I love your alternative and humorous twist on a poem about wind and air that blows all around us; balloons thrive on the stuff, LOL.
A very penetrating last line I might add!
Delightful and full of mischief. Hooray
Take care and stay safe, Pete
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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Thanks for reviewing for scant reward. I was feeling grumpy when I wrote it but you have put me in a better mood.
