Summer Breeze
3/5/3 poem for contest7 total reviews
Comment from Bichon
A lovely poem! I like how you used techniques of memories and remembrance to almost unlock feelings of perhaps distant love that once occurred. You will have to do another for winter now!!
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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A lovely poem! I like how you used techniques of memories and remembrance to almost unlock feelings of perhaps distant love that once occurred. You will have to do another for winter now!!
Comment Written 05-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much for your review and kind words.
Comment from Waterfowl
Nothing quite beats a summer breeze and the feelings it brings. Though it would be more meaningful to me if I had a girlfriend...
But enough about my nonexistent love life. Your poem was great. It felt relaxing.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Nothing quite beats a summer breeze and the feelings it brings. Though it would be more meaningful to me if I had a girlfriend...
But enough about my nonexistent love life. Your poem was great. It felt relaxing.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Sorry about the nonexistent love life, I can relate ... lol
Thank you very much :) Happy weekend!
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Thanks. Enjoy your weekend.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 3-5-3, Summer Breeze, has the proper formatting and notes that a soothing wind can bring with it a sense of the pastbetter times. and
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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This 3-5-3, Summer Breeze, has the proper formatting and notes that a soothing wind can bring with it a sense of the pastbetter times. and
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much :) Happy weekend!
Comment from patw27
The art work fits this poem nicely. Most fond memories are from the Summer time. Not necessarily of love, but of adventures one might have had with close friends. You did a wonderful job.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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The art work fits this poem nicely. Most fond memories are from the Summer time. Not necessarily of love, but of adventures one might have had with close friends. You did a wonderful job.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much :) Happy weekend!
Comment from minkay6
Beautiful, ethereal, gentle, and uplifting. These are all the words that were brought to my mind after reading this poem. Simple and yet it conveys a world of ideas. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Beautiful, ethereal, gentle, and uplifting. These are all the words that were brought to my mind after reading this poem. Simple and yet it conveys a world of ideas. Excellent work.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much :) Happy weekend!
Comment from Wendy G
The image supports your poem very well - light, airy, romantic, suggestive of love. The summer breeze is gentle as are the memories of love. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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The image supports your poem very well - light, airy, romantic, suggestive of love. The summer breeze is gentle as are the memories of love. Well written. Best wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2020
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Thank you very much :) Happy weekend!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
The photo really enhances your poem. Her lost in the clouds feel reminds me of that walking through mush kind of bliss we feel when love is new and full of promise.
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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The photo really enhances your poem. Her lost in the clouds feel reminds me of that walking through mush kind of bliss we feel when love is new and full of promise.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2020
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thank you very much, Shauna :)
