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Booming thunder echoes

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Comment from sammielwf
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So mystery poet- .
When you were younger you were a " baby boomer" yes?
I thought your story in your authors notes was priceless.
The verse you wrote emphasized your photo and your personal story.
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    Hahaha Yes baby boomer!! Thanks for your comments and review.
Comment from Susan X Smith
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This is an acceptable contest entry, but I would prefer the word "gloom" for the first line. The current word does not seem to fit the rhyme or meaning.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    I very good suggestion. I will seriously consider making the change before the voting begins. Thank you for your review.