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Vote as if your life depends on it. Huh?

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Comment from LisaMay
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Your poem DOES make sense to me and it is a very relevant comment. A lot of people have closed minds and won't accept a legitimate result in voting. You Americans should still trust the voting system - it wasn't 'rigged', reputable sources and officials stake their integrity on it.... but I guess 'integrity' is fake news these days - what a laughably old-fashioned value when there is money to be made and power to hold.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
Comment from LeftHandedScribe
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The syllable count works well, and I like the use of punctuation. I'd like to see a little more play with language. This reads as a statement, and I'd like to see you play around with more poetry.

 Comment Written 06-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    Thank you!
reply by the author on 06-Dec-2020
    I have changed my poem. You can check it out again. It is humorous now. A silly poem.