Soulmates
Throughout Time27 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This acrostic romance poem, SOULMATES, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and secures the idea that two people CAN meet and fall in love.
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This acrostic romance poem, SOULMATES, follows the vertical, first-letter theme and secures the idea that two people CAN meet and fall in love.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this great review...I really appreciate it. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
What a beautiful acrostic poem! I absolutely love the picture. You and your husband look very happy together. This made me smile wide ð??? thank you for sharing
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What a beautiful acrostic poem! I absolutely love the picture. You and your husband look very happy together. This made me smile wide ð??? thank you for sharing
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Thank you this wonderful 6 star review. :)
Comment from djsaxon
A heartfelt and heartwarming acrostic. I am a huge fan of the form, and love that your write has been recognized. Free verse and it works well. Thank you for sharing - DJ
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A heartfelt and heartwarming acrostic. I am a huge fan of the form, and love that your write has been recognized. Free verse and it works well. Thank you for sharing - DJ
Comment Written 10-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Thank you, I'm really glad that you liked it. :)
Comment from Gloria ....
Very nicely written acrostic, BN. Your lines all expand on the theme of your acrostic that has stood the test of time.
Congrats on a well-earned contest win. A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Very nicely written acrostic, BN. Your lines all expand on the theme of your acrostic that has stood the test of time.
Congrats on a well-earned contest win. A most enjoyable read today. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much and I appreciate you reading my poem. :)
Comment from MissMerri
You describe some wonderful and recognizable feelings in this acrostic poem. "Soulmates throughout time, I can tell" is a great ending line. I wish you well in this contest. Is that you in the picture? MM
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You describe some wonderful and recognizable feelings in this acrostic poem. "Soulmates throughout time, I can tell" is a great ending line. I wish you well in this contest. Is that you in the picture? MM
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you. That's my husband and I on the day we were married at the courthouse. No fancy wedding or dress, neither of us could afford it. But we were crazy in love so it didn't matter. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from Patricia Cammish
You have chosen a good word for a romance acrostic and have set down some lovely ideas. If you can have a rhyme scheme also in this format that can only be a bonus.
You start off very well with a rhyming couplet but then the rest gets unpredictable and you have aabacdacc . The flow then is lost, which is a shame, as this poem is full of great ideas and is describing something beautiful.
An excellent idea to colour the initial letters. How do you do that ? I've only found options for colouring the whole text.
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reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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You have chosen a good word for a romance acrostic and have set down some lovely ideas. If you can have a rhyme scheme also in this format that can only be a bonus.
You start off very well with a rhyming couplet but then the rest gets unpredictable and you have aabacdacc . The flow then is lost, which is a shame, as this poem is full of great ideas and is describing something beautiful.
An excellent idea to colour the initial letters. How do you do that ? I've only found options for colouring the whole text.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem. :)
Comment from equestrik
I love this presentation with a sweet picture to go with your writing. I also love the idea of soul mates through time. What a comforting possibility! Nice write for the contest.
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I love this presentation with a sweet picture to go with your writing. I also love the idea of soul mates through time. What a comforting possibility! Nice write for the contest.
Comment Written 09-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your kind words.
Comment from Jasmine Girl
This is a well written acrostic romantic poem about a life long relationship that is still going well. Actually it has lasted for several life times and they are still soulmates. Congratulations.
It flows well and has expressed her romantic feelings to him.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This is a well written acrostic romantic poem about a life long relationship that is still going well. Actually it has lasted for several life times and they are still soulmates. Congratulations.
It flows well and has expressed her romantic feelings to him.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and for your insightful comments. It's always appreciated. :)
Comment from Ann Market
This is wonderful! I like the title you chose for the acrostic, and I also really like the rhyming. The story truly is a sweet one; I enjoyed this!
Good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This is wonderful! I like the title you chose for the acrostic, and I also really like the rhyming. The story truly is a sweet one; I enjoyed this!
Good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you so much for your kind words and this great review. :)
Comment from June Sargent
This is an outstanding acrostic poem that captures the timelessness of true love. You've created a piece that flows naturally. Some acrostics feel forced and awkward. To have a soulmate is a gift for eternity. Fine tribute to romance.
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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This is an outstanding acrostic poem that captures the timelessness of true love. You've created a piece that flows naturally. Some acrostics feel forced and awkward. To have a soulmate is a gift for eternity. Fine tribute to romance.
Comment Written 08-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 09-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I appreciate your input and noticed that you gave me an average rating. Is there anything I can do to improve it? This is how I continue to learn and grow as a poet. Any suggestions you may have would be welcome. :)
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Sorry about that! Arthritic fingers... will revise!
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I have those too! Thanks for responding. :)
