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Buy American-made

If you MUST keep buying stuff...

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Comment from Julie Sandy
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Great poem for the 5-7-5 competition, great message to buy local all local shops need the support now.
I can see you won, that's amazing

Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 14-Dec-2020

Comment from Bill Schott
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This Santa 5-7-5, Buy American-made, has the right set up and reminds the readers that now is the time to buy close to home and help the economy.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020

Comment from equestrik
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Good write on what I believe to be an important topic for sure. Perhaps this is something we can figure out and learn from all of this craziness this year.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    I think a lot of lessons are going to be learnt from this year. We just have to stay alive to act on them.
reply by equestrik on 13-Dec-2020
    true
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
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Buy American-made

Hello my friend,

Great entry for the Santa 5-7-5 writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. It's pretty funny and I love the picture. Nice presentation.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks for your positive response to my poem!
Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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Witty poem with a slight political statement...it's go it all.
The puns are clever and work well. If you changed up Santa for Rudolf, you might have had a shot at winning the animal pun contest as well.
I am with you on buying American. I'm old enough to remember when people were craftsmen and we liked to get gifts with beauty and quality instead of the newest plastic phone that year.
Strong contender in the contest. Good luck.

 Comment Written 13-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
    Thanks for reviewing! I remember the days of quality gifts also, things that lasted instead of having to get a revised version all the time. All this incessant change isn't necessarily a good thing in products.
Comment from sammielwf
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On this starry Christmas Holiday- purchasing products made in the USA would be a great gift to the economy. Helping small businesses is so very important....Very fun and realistically based poem for the times
Sammielwf

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
    Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
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Very punny--the BUCK stops DEER--also witty play on the common phrase buck stops here--this clever closer earns your stars in itself! Good luck. Priceless pic!

 Comment Written 12-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 12-Dec-2020
    Thanks for reviewing!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
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Buck the duck, will stop:) funny little poem. I wonder how Amazon got stuck on Chinese:) Thankyou for sharing and good luck with the contest and with your writings.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020

Comment from Wendy G
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Very clever play with words here, with buck and deer, and the common expression. I like the photo prompt. I like the little political touch. It's a great entry, so best wishes.

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    I'm not American, but I've been trashing Trump lately so I thought I'd balance it and give a nod to his Make America Great policies of buying American products.
reply by Wendy G on 11-Dec-2020
    Aha, just gave yourself away didn't you?! Lol. Hope you win!
reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    ooops!! Don't tell. It was inadvertent.
reply by Wendy G on 12-Dec-2020
    My lips are sealed!!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Chinese manufacturing is big business and they often don't follow safety guidelines in order to produce cheap goods for the entire world. We have 'China Town' shops all over and they are very popular. There is little competition and I would gladly buy locally produced products. Your 5-7-5 is clever and inventive, much enjoyed, you made me smile here, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 11-Dec-2020


reply by the author on 11-Dec-2020
    Cheap Chinese prices are off the backs of exploited labour and unsafe practices and their goods flood the market, making it hard for low wage workers to afford locally produced good... if indeed they can find them.
    (I acknowledge that is one thing Trump was trying to encourage with his Make America Great strategy for American products.)