senryu (he's playing around)
Whether it's golf or politics, he can't stand losing.13 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Oh this is just SO clever. I love your work!! Just so perfect in every way. I realise I shouldn't have guessed who wrote it, but ... of course it is you!
And congratulations on your second place in the 'What makes me happy' contest - I thought that was you too, and I thought it might have won.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Oh this is just SO clever. I love your work!! Just so perfect in every way. I realise I shouldn't have guessed who wrote it, but ... of course it is you!
And congratulations on your second place in the 'What makes me happy' contest - I thought that was you too, and I thought it might have won.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I like how you are on the same page as I am. You 'get' my stuff.
Thanks for your good wishes.
Comment from Elizabeth Emerald
Wickedly witty--let me guess--you're not a Trumpeteer. (DUH) Clever wordplay--very punny golf imagery--esp. closer. This probably won't win unless the judges are staunch Bidenites. Good luck with that.
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Wickedly witty--let me guess--you're not a Trumpeteer. (DUH) Clever wordplay--very punny golf imagery--esp. closer. This probably won't win unless the judges are staunch Bidenites. Good luck with that.
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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In an ideal word, a writing site contest would just be judged on writing ability, not one's political allegiance.
I hope trump plays off into the rough and gets chewed up by a grizzly bear, saving the cost and timewasting of all these ridiculous lawsuits.
Comment from djsaxon
I did wonder what Tom would elicit by putting a Political senryu on the table. True to form. I am thinking that Trump has still to play the last hole before he returns to the club house. DJ
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reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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I did wonder what Tom would elicit by putting a Political senryu on the table. True to form. I am thinking that Trump has still to play the last hole before he returns to the club house. DJ
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Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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The forum is rather 'robust', so Tom must have known something similar would happen in this prompt.
I hope trump gets lost in the rough and a mountain lion eats him.
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I should not be laughing. I thought you guys had killed off most of your mountain lions.
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At the risk of revealing my country of residence, we do not have mountain lions where I live. We kill off other critters.
