Fortune Cookies
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Cybertron1986 I wish I had a six for this chapter in you book
Demons, Heroes and Fortune Cookies
You make thing so vivid especially this part
From inside his room, El is occupied to the slight misalignment of his comic book, "Web of Spider-Man," issue #31, that is tacked on his bedside wall. His inability to achieve the perfect, symmetrical placement annoys him more than the sound of someone sucking their gums inside the study area of a library.
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Cybertron1986 I wish I had a six for this chapter in you book
Demons, Heroes and Fortune Cookies
You make thing so vivid especially this part
From inside his room, El is occupied to the slight misalignment of his comic book, "Web of Spider-Man," issue #31, that is tacked on his bedside wall. His inability to achieve the perfect, symmetrical placement annoys him more than the sound of someone sucking their gums inside the study area of a library.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 14-Dec-2020
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Hello, Gert. Thank you for your review. It made my evening extra special. It?s always great to hear from you. Thank you !
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Hello, Gert. Thank you for your review. It made my evening extra special. It?s always great to hear from you. Thank you !
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Cybertron1986 you are so welcome
Gert
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Cybertron1986
You are most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
So glad that you got back to this! I know you had so much going on this year. Missed seeing your posts!
I really could visualize the host of guys in the dorm, all so interested in the pretty girl who had come to see El. Did this happen shortly after El encountered the ghost?
Since it's been awhile since the last post, (I have a book with long gaps in between) I suggest that you put a list of characters and what happened just before this post.
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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So glad that you got back to this! I know you had so much going on this year. Missed seeing your posts!
I really could visualize the host of guys in the dorm, all so interested in the pretty girl who had come to see El. Did this happen shortly after El encountered the ghost?
Since it's been awhile since the last post, (I have a book with long gaps in between) I suggest that you put a list of characters and what happened just before this post.
Comment Written 13-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 13-Dec-2020
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Hi, Helen! Thank you. Yes, it?s been a long while. This pandemic along with the imbalance of the world lately has my mind, and priorities, all over the place. I hope your emotional and peaceful state is faring better than I. Thank you for the kind review. It feels good to be somewhat back. I shall take note of your advice!