Comment from
greyson ernst
this is a awesome story i have no suggestions and as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday
sincerely Greyson Ernst
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
Thank you for the Time to Read, Rate and Review it. I'm Wondering if you found it a fictional or non-fiction piece?
Comment from
sammielwf
Could this really happen you ask? Why not! In the world in which we live in today people fight over just about anything.
Would I advise getting a little "in the cups" and choosing to fight with four other guys? Probably not- but as I said at the beginning of this review- this is 2020 the year of crazy stuff happening all the time.
The story was an interesting throw back with the cord phone though. I do remember them from my high school days in Maine. You could twirl the cord around your hand and wrist and only walk so far as you talked- forgetting that cord meant being jerked back into reality very quickly!
Sammielwf
Comment Written 14-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Dec-2020
Thank you for your Time to Review and Rate this true story piece.