Who is Santa Claws?
(5-7-5) The virus is changing things.23 total reviews
Comment from Lucy de Welles
How funny! Takes a truly original mind to come up with this one. I'm sure the Pink Panther approves. He's been trying to oust Santa for 56 years now. Coming up on his diamond jubilee!
Well done!
Lucy
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
How funny! Takes a truly original mind to come up with this one. I'm sure the Pink Panther approves. He's been trying to oust Santa for 56 years now. Coming up on his diamond jubilee!
Well done!
Lucy
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Gosh, is the Pink Panther really that old?? I must be showing my age to remember it so vividly.
Comment from Mia Twysted
I had a lovely chuckle reading this piece, I like the mix of characters merged with a little bit of reality. Nicely done.
I wish you best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
I had a lovely chuckle reading this piece, I like the mix of characters merged with a little bit of reality. Nicely done.
I wish you best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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I'm pleased i could deliver a chuckle!
Comment from Father Flaps
Hi Lisa
Actually, you picked the right character to play Santa. The Pink Panther always slips around, peeking out, tip-toes, lurking... the only thing missing is a bag full of toys and am 8 RP sleigh. (RP means "Reindeer-Powered", of course). I always loved Peter Sellers in the Pink Panther movies, as Inspector Clouseau! Sadly, he died of a heart attack at age 54. Such a great comedian. I loved the scenes where he would spar with his butler, Cato Fong, who was played by Burt Kwuok. They'd sneak around the house, just like Santa does.
I like the play on words, "Claus/Claws".
Good Luck in the contest! I missed this one somehow.
Cheers,
Kimbob
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
Hi Lisa
Actually, you picked the right character to play Santa. The Pink Panther always slips around, peeking out, tip-toes, lurking... the only thing missing is a bag full of toys and am 8 RP sleigh. (RP means "Reindeer-Powered", of course). I always loved Peter Sellers in the Pink Panther movies, as Inspector Clouseau! Sadly, he died of a heart attack at age 54. Such a great comedian. I loved the scenes where he would spar with his butler, Cato Fong, who was played by Burt Kwuok. They'd sneak around the house, just like Santa does.
I like the play on words, "Claus/Claws".
Good Luck in the contest! I missed this one somehow.
Cheers,
Kimbob
Comment Written 18-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 20-Dec-2020
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Peter Sellers was a marvellous actor - Inspector Clouseau was an enjoyable character.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about Santa. The past months our normal way of thinking has adapt to the pandemic and we see everything in a different light than before.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about Santa. The past months our normal way of thinking has adapt to the pandemic and we see everything in a different light than before.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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'Strange' is the new normal.
Comment from Mark D. R.
I voted for your funny contest entry. It is a cute idea you shared with us.
If I had written YOUR poem, the last line would read:
Covid (sic) mutates me! 'Mutated' would make the last line six syllables!! (-;
Mark
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
I voted for your funny contest entry. It is a cute idea you shared with us.
If I had written YOUR poem, the last line would read:
Covid (sic) mutates me! 'Mutated' would make the last line six syllables!! (-;
Mark
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Terrific! Thanks for your vote!
Comment from Y. M. Roger
LOL!! Gotta ask, though: is it COVID doing the mutation or the vaccine they're proposing...? wink, wink. :) Thanx for sharing, my lady, and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
LOL!! Gotta ask, though: is it COVID doing the mutation or the vaccine they're proposing...? wink, wink. :) Thanx for sharing, my lady, and best of luck at the polls! ;) Yvette
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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I think EVERYTHING is mutating.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 santa writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Blast from the past....I haven't seen the pink panther in a long time.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
Hello, my friend,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 santa writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines.
Blast from the past....I haven't seen the pink panther in a long time.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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I used to love watching the Pink Panther. Thanks for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This Santa 5-7-5, Who is SantaClaus?, has the proper formatting and suggests that the wily old cat with the pink fur is really Santa Claus. He may as well be.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
This Santa 5-7-5, Who is SantaClaus?, has the proper formatting and suggests that the wily old cat with the pink fur is really Santa Claus. He may as well be.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Nothing would surprise me these days.
Comment from equestrik
This is a cute write for the contest and is a fun scenario with the play on 'claus' and the mutation of Santa. Good presentation with both your writing and the picture.
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
This is a cute write for the contest and is a fun scenario with the play on 'claus' and the mutation of Santa. Good presentation with both your writing and the picture.
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your great review!
Comment from Teri7
This is just too cute and true. You used very good and very true words with adorable imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
This is just too cute and true. You used very good and very true words with adorable imagery from the art work you chose. Best wishes in the contest. love, Teri
Comment Written 17-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 18-Dec-2020
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Thanks for your positive review!