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Who is Santa Claws?

(5-7-5) The virus is changing things.

23 total reviews 
Comment from zanya
Exceptional
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Just love it - this is where we are at, it seems with this dreadful virus and how it is mutating- a poem to cheer us up with its tongue -in-cheek humor and sense of fun

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from robyn corum
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Lisa May,

hahahahahaha I was wondering why poor old Santy Claws was a different color... NOW it makes sense. hahahaha I mean, with everything else that's been going on this year - why not, right?

Syllable count is perfect!

Thanks and good luck!

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Julie Sandy
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I love the pink panther, he was always on TV when I was a kid.
Like the twist on this its funny, good entry for the competition.

Thanks for sharing

Brings back happy memories

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Cynthia Adams1
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I so love your poem...very cute.
I'm wondering how you came up with this artwork.
I particularly enjoy humorous entries these days...we've all been through a lot this year.
It is a clever spin on the Covid virus.
Nice job.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from poetwatch
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Here kitty, "Come be my present. /I will gift wrap you and then /tear you to pieces" with my claws. If that what you want to say, Jenny? :) I think you are getting into the Holiday spirit. This is a good offering for the 5-7-5 Santa contest. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Mary Vigasin
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This is so funny, creative and clever. I haven't thought of the Pink Panther in years but kind to think of it like Covid he did sneak around
Well done
Mary

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Wils
Exceptional
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I had to laugh at this one. A scary but humourous thought. Just hope the vaccine doesn't cause further mutation. Thanks for my first laugh of the day.
Geoff

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from greyson ernst
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LOL you got my vote this is so good the picture to were did you get the picture but as always keep writing and stay safe have a happy holiday


sincerely Greyson Ernst

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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He he he, this is funny and I heard that Covid has mutated but they still think the vaccine will work! The pink Panther is a sneaky character and so many imitate the real Santa! I'm so glad I saw the real one last year! He he he, a fun post, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020

Comment from Pantygynt
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Far more than a mere 5-7-5 this is definitely a senryu, with a wonderful satori style conclusion and it would appear to be true. Apparently Covid is already mutating and that is why it is more militant this second time around.

 Comment Written 16-Dec-2020