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Abdullah

Pa and Abdullah loved their daily walks.

2 total reviews 
Comment from Wendy G
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What a beautiful photo and such a lovely story about Abdullah. He does look magnificent! Your story is well written, and told with admiration and respect for him and his lovely qualities. Good wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    Ciao !

    Glad you enjoyed my essay .. writing about Abdullah was bittersweet .. as I got to the closing line , I was crying ..

    Stay safe!



Comment from muffinmama
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What a delightful dog to have in the family! You beautifully captured his spirit and personality.
As always, closer attention to grammatical details (punctuation, specifically) would raise the star level of the submission.
Keep enjoying Abdullah, and keep writing about him.

 Comment Written 17-Dec-2020

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    Ciao !

    Thank you for your feedback ..

    my beloved Abdullah passed away but his memory is vivid ..

    Glad you enjoyed the vibe of my essay .. I?ll see what I can do about the punctuation.

reply by the author on 17-Dec-2020
    I went over it again and hopefully I adjusted some punctuation issues.

    Grammar programmes cost too much ..

    I don?t write much and read even less in English..

    I just wanted to talk about our boy a bit ..

    Keep safe

    Ciao!
reply by muffinmama on 19-Dec-2020
    I didn't realize English was not your main language. You did well.
    Sorry to hear about Abdullah. I completely understand, having lost a most beloved dog as well.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2020
    No problems .. I?m here also to better my English ..

    I?m sorry for your loss .. pets are family members and when they die they leave a huge void .. in time happy memories help us along

    Keep safe!