Wind-whipped Waves
5-7-5 describing the sea in winter.13 total reviews
Comment from Paul Borders
Dagnabbit Lisamay, I wish I had seen this contest sooner. I would have voted for your submission which would have placed it alone in third place instead of tied for third. I like it - best of the bunch in my opinion.
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Dagnabbit Lisamay, I wish I had seen this contest sooner. I would have voted for your submission which would have placed it alone in third place instead of tied for third. I like it - best of the bunch in my opinion.
Comment Written 27-Dec-2020
Comment from Katherine M. (k-11)
To my mind this is proving to be a close-run contest, but your wonderful triple rhyme coverineg all three line ends might just tip the balance in your favour.
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To my mind this is proving to be a close-run contest, but your wonderful triple rhyme coverineg all three line ends might just tip the balance in your favour.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Fine words to describe this scene here, you brought the tossing foam to my eyes as the grey storm sweeps across the bay, great imagery, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
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Fine words to describe this scene here, you brought the tossing foam to my eyes as the grey storm sweeps across the bay, great imagery, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I love your poem it has so much metaphors and creates a very delicate embroidery of the power pf the nature. "Surging, foam-tossed spray,
racing clouds of stormy gray -
squall across the bay." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and good luck with the contest.
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I love your poem it has so much metaphors and creates a very delicate embroidery of the power pf the nature. "Surging, foam-tossed spray,
racing clouds of stormy gray -
squall across the bay." Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2020
Comment from Julie Sandy
Great entry for the 575 competition, you used great descriptive words to paint a picture of the sea, it worked really well.
Thank you for sharing
and good luck
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Great entry for the 575 competition, you used great descriptive words to paint a picture of the sea, it worked really well.
Thank you for sharing
and good luck
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
This is an Awesome poem about the sea in Winter. Surging foam tossed spray. Racing clouds of stormy grey. Very nicely done . Beautiful photo to go with your work as well. Good luck in the contest.
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This is an Awesome poem about the sea in Winter. Surging foam tossed spray. Racing clouds of stormy grey. Very nicely done . Beautiful photo to go with your work as well. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from kmoss
This poem is a great entry for the contest. I like the use of the word squall which is typically used to describe snow, since this is a winter sea poem, it works well. Good luck in the contest!
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This poem is a great entry for the contest. I like the use of the word squall which is typically used to describe snow, since this is a winter sea poem, it works well. Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from Mrs. KT
Good Morning, Mystery Writer!
Whew! I have chills!
Reminds me of standing seaside in Wales a few years back = freezing as I watch the "squalls across the bay!"
The addition of rhyme is creative and effective!
Best Wishes!
diane
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Good Morning, Mystery Writer!
Whew! I have chills!
Reminds me of standing seaside in Wales a few years back = freezing as I watch the "squalls across the bay!"
The addition of rhyme is creative and effective!
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from rspoet
You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and alliteration as well as the addition
of the three rhymes.
Perfect picture and layout.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
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You've written an excellent 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery and alliteration as well as the addition
of the three rhymes.
Perfect picture and layout.
Well done.
Best wishes to you.
Robert
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
Comment from equestrik
This is a really good write for the winter seas writing prompt. The picture you chose is beautiful and goes perfectly with your writing. Best to you in the contest.
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This is a really good write for the winter seas writing prompt. The picture you chose is beautiful and goes perfectly with your writing. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
