Give Thanks
We Should All...15 total reviews
Comment from Wendy G
Yes, we should all be giving thanks with a grateful heart for all blessings received, and often not acknowledged. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Yes, we should all be giving thanks with a grateful heart for all blessings received, and often not acknowledged. Good wishes for your entry in the contest.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you for reading my poem and for this nice review. :)
Comment from Eternal Muse
This was short but so powerful. I like the gratefulness of the piece and the very optimistic tone of it, which is contagions. It put me in a better mood and I wish this New Year will be much happier than the previous one. Great imagery and visuals.
Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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This was short but so powerful. I like the gratefulness of the piece and the very optimistic tone of it, which is contagions. It put me in a better mood and I wish this New Year will be much happier than the previous one. Great imagery and visuals.
Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Thank you and have a very happy New Year. :)
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Writer,
Man -- hahaha -- ain't that the truth?! Those of us lucky enough to have survived this crazy year should celebrate in a BIG WAY. It's been a nutso year and things have GOT to improve with 2021, don't you think???
PLEASE???!!!
Your syllable counts are all just right and this was a simple, relatable poem. Thanks and good luck!
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Dear Mystery Writer,
Man -- hahaha -- ain't that the truth?! Those of us lucky enough to have survived this crazy year should celebrate in a BIG WAY. It's been a nutso year and things have GOT to improve with 2021, don't you think???
PLEASE???!!!
Your syllable counts are all just right and this was a simple, relatable poem. Thanks and good luck!
Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Things are going to be so much better..I know it. Thanks for reading. :)
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
Yes I fell very blessed to be here and enjoy the holidays with my family and friends. I'm with my brother and niece right now and their spouses. We are having a wonderful time. Hope you have a very Happy New Year.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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Yes I fell very blessed to be here and enjoy the holidays with my family and friends. I'm with my brother and niece right now and their spouses. We are having a wonderful time. Hope you have a very Happy New Year.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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I'm so glad you're having a happy time. Thanks for reading and you and your family have a happy New Year. :)
Comment from Anne Johnston
When we think of all the people who have passed away this year because of the pandemic, we should be grateful. I don't really believe in luck, just in the goodness of God, and I thank Him for keeping me safe.
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reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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When we think of all the people who have passed away this year because of the pandemic, we should be grateful. I don't really believe in luck, just in the goodness of God, and I thank Him for keeping me safe.
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Comment Written 23-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2020
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I thought about what you said and I agree. I too thank God so I changed it from lucky to thankful. I appreciate you reading my poem and for your perspective. :)
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I wasn't criticizing your words, but I think thankful is more appropriate.
