Shame on you.
Dogs being dumped. Karma will seek these perps out.3 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Oh, Franca, that poor little dog. I am so glad you used this contest format to reach the FS audience to have compassion for the animals that are homeless and neglected. A very lovely write.
Melissa
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Oh, Franca, that poor little dog. I am so glad you used this contest format to reach the FS audience to have compassion for the animals that are homeless and neglected. A very lovely write.
Melissa
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
Comment from LisaMay
I regard mistreating or abandoning an animal to be a criminal offense, so the subject matter of your nonet resonated with me. Stylistically, you've maintained interest with use of occasional rhyme, internal and end.
I would probably put a comma after: With winter near,
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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I regard mistreating or abandoning an animal to be a criminal offense, so the subject matter of your nonet resonated with me. Stylistically, you've maintained interest with use of occasional rhyme, internal and end.
I would probably put a comma after: With winter near,
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the positive review and grammar alert.
I have added the comma!
Yes I consider animal abuse a crime but most perps get off or are just fined..
Good thing there is KARMA ..
Keep safe!
Comment from Susan X Smith
This poem is an appropriate entry for the Nonet writing challenge. It tells the sad story of abused and neglected animals. The picture is a fitting complement to the words.
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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This poem is an appropriate entry for the Nonet writing challenge. It tells the sad story of abused and neglected animals. The picture is a fitting complement to the words.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2020
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Thank you for the positive review ..
we say Dogs are man?s best friend...
sadly too many owners don?t return those same feelings/sentiments.
Keep safe !
