Sojourner In A Finite Space
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Comment from Faith the Border collie
I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you! Such a good reminder to take a moment and just be. It felt natural to read both internally and aloud.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy New Year
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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I thoroughly enjoyed this, thank you! Such a good reminder to take a moment and just be. It felt natural to read both internally and aloud.
Thank you for sharing.
Happy New Year
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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This makes me smile and I thank you for your comments. Happiest of New Years!
Comment from robyn corum
JLR,
You mean I can learn to sparkle just by breathing differently??? Wow. I need to learn some sparkling tricks. As I age, it gets a little harder. Thanks for this offering~
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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JLR,
You mean I can learn to sparkle just by breathing differently??? Wow. I need to learn some sparkling tricks. As I age, it gets a little harder. Thanks for this offering~
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Robyn, I know that your sparkle will be seen my many in 2021 and that your Presence will be salve to their souls.. SPARKLE BRIGHTLY.....
Comment from Lance S. Loria
You poem seems to be a positive message but I must say I was clearly confused by the true meaning. It was unclear to me. Perhaps it is because it was Free Verse which is my lease favorite of the poetry types. Have no fear, I realize this is my short coming and not a reflection of your poetry writing skill. I read your work over and found it to be professionally written. No edits or adjustments necessary.
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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You poem seems to be a positive message but I must say I was clearly confused by the true meaning. It was unclear to me. Perhaps it is because it was Free Verse which is my lease favorite of the poetry types. Have no fear, I realize this is my short coming and not a reflection of your poetry writing skill. I read your work over and found it to be professionally written. No edits or adjustments necessary.
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Lance thank you for your authentic voice about poetry preferences. While I attempt to write content in "free verse" style that provides a wide range of poetic devices, the most important aspect of the writing is that it should be easily understood. I will address this in future submissions.....Happy New Year
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a good answer to the challenge. It shows how a soul can sparkle from inside out. This sounds both like prayer and meditation which probably could be close to the same things and times.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy New Year.
Joan
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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This is a good answer to the challenge. It shows how a soul can sparkle from inside out. This sounds both like prayer and meditation which probably could be close to the same things and times.
Keep writing and stay healthy.
Happy New Year.
Joan
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Joan, thank you and I know your sparkle will warm peoples soul whom you meet throughout 2021 - Happy New Year!
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You're welcome. And, thanks for the compliment JLR
Happy New Year
Joan
Comment from Eternal Muse
This is great free verse. Excellent response to the club's challenge. I like the imagery and visuals, and the philosophical nature of it.
Let each sparkling ray,
glow from its infinite place in the depths of space
directly into your minds-eye
Thank you so much for sharing and happy New Year!
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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This is great free verse. Excellent response to the club's challenge. I like the imagery and visuals, and the philosophical nature of it.
Let each sparkling ray,
glow from its infinite place in the depths of space
directly into your minds-eye
Thank you so much for sharing and happy New Year!
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Eternal Muse! SMILING BACK, It is my hope that as you dance on the keyboards of life that you make wonderful music to make ready your grand entrance to everyday! Happy New Year!
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello JLR, this sounds like a very good poem on the importance of Mindfulness - something I have never managed to grasp LOL! Your poem, if I decipher correctly sounds so easy and enjoyable, maybe I am missing out. It is a lovely read and as I read this poem, I am slowly sinking in to its benefits. Well done. Hopefully I shall sparkly. Good entry to the club challenge. Happy New Year - Dorothy x
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Hello JLR, this sounds like a very good poem on the importance of Mindfulness - something I have never managed to grasp LOL! Your poem, if I decipher correctly sounds so easy and enjoyable, maybe I am missing out. It is a lovely read and as I read this poem, I am slowly sinking in to its benefits. Well done. Hopefully I shall sparkly. Good entry to the club challenge. Happy New Year - Dorothy x
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Thank you! Breathe slow and deep often in the coming year!
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I followed all your instructions and feel so much better now! Yes, that's the way to sparkle! What a lovely poem, JLR, even the lines sparkled. Well done, you met the Free Verse Challange well! Happy New Year! :)) Sandra xxx
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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I followed all your instructions and feel so much better now! Yes, that's the way to sparkle! What a lovely poem, JLR, even the lines sparkled. Well done, you met the Free Verse Challange well! Happy New Year! :)) Sandra xxx
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Smiling back with much Joy! Breathe slow and deep often in the coming year!
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem
They make a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the start I like how you used the word sparkle it fits very well
thank you f sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem
They make a perfect match.
you captured my attention from the start I like how you used the word sparkle it fits very well
thank you f sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Thank you! BIG NEW YEARS EVE HUGS!
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Your very welcome, Praise God we made to another year.
Cookie
Comment from l.raven
Hi Jim, sounds like a moment of meditation...
just breath deep...let everything relax...
feel the peace and calm...I love your poem
my sweet friend...and your picture is stunning...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Hi Jim, sounds like a moment of meditation...
just breath deep...let everything relax...
feel the peace and calm...I love your poem
my sweet friend...and your picture is stunning...
very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 31-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Linda, thank you!
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your sooooo very welcome Jim...love xxoo
Comment from Jewell McChesney
Wow. I wasn't expecting the theme of this to be "Sparkle" but I suppose it makes sense.
A well written poem for this contest. I wish you well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Jewell
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Wow. I wasn't expecting the theme of this to be "Sparkle" but I suppose it makes sense.
A well written poem for this contest. I wish you well.
Thank you for sharing your gift.
Jewell
Comment Written 30-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 31-Dec-2020
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Jewell yes the beauty of these weekly club challenges....Surprises abound...HAPPY NEW YEAR~
