Tough guy
On the prowl7 total reviews
Comment from Raffaelina Lowcock
This formidable child with determination will stay the course. This is such a good portrayal of a little tough guy. I enjoyed reading this and so I'm voting. I hope you win.
Ralf
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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This formidable child with determination will stay the course. This is such a good portrayal of a little tough guy. I enjoyed reading this and so I'm voting. I hope you win.
Ralf
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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He's my buddy. Thank you Ralf.
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Sorry, I didn't get to vote. I was late in reviewing. LOL
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Oh, I do like the rhythm you've chosen as it totally fits the message and that cute lil' face!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Oh, I do like the rhythm you've chosen as it totally fits the message and that cute lil' face!! ;) Thanx so much for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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He's my buddy. Thank you Ralf.
Comment from Rosemary Everson1
This is such a cute poem about a young man that will soon get into politics soon enough! To be an American is the best thing ever! We are proud of our country, USA!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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This is such a cute poem about a young man that will soon get into politics soon enough! To be an American is the best thing ever! We are proud of our country, USA!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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He's my buddy. Thank you Rosemary.
Comment from 4theloveoftrees
Awesome! I love this and the last stanza really brings it all together, nicely done! And a handsome little tough guy to go with it. Best of luck to you!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Awesome! I love this and the last stanza really brings it all together, nicely done! And a handsome little tough guy to go with it. Best of luck to you!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much. He's my buddy.
Comment from Susan Louise Gabriel
I love this! The photo is perfect for the poem, and the poem is adorable. I especially like the last stanza:
I'll grow up strong,
I'll know right from wrong,
I'm an American, you see.
Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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I love this! The photo is perfect for the poem, and the poem is adorable. I especially like the last stanza:
I'll grow up strong,
I'll know right from wrong,
I'm an American, you see.
Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much Susan, he's my buddy.
Comment from David Newkirk
Loved it! It has a nice rhythm. The AAB AAB rhyme scheme in most of the stanzas adds to this. Great pic and I have no doubt this kid will be rough and tough! Well done
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Loved it! It has a nice rhythm. The AAB AAB rhyme scheme in most of the stanzas adds to this. Great pic and I have no doubt this kid will be rough and tough! Well done
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you David, he's my buddy.
Comment from Goodadvicechan
This is an excellent poem. It has a positive attitude; I am tough. I will handle everything including disagreement. What a message to deliver.
I like the picture of a tough boy. Character is buried in the DNA when people are young. Right or wrong? Once it is there, it is there forever and difficult to change it.
I like this poem.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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This is an excellent poem. It has a positive attitude; I am tough. I will handle everything including disagreement. What a message to deliver.
I like the picture of a tough boy. Character is buried in the DNA when people are young. Right or wrong? Once it is there, it is there forever and difficult to change it.
I like this poem.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2020
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2021
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Thank you, he's my buddy.
