cupid
a 5 7 5 love story5 total reviews
Comment from Paul Borders
Howdy - my vote placed your contest submission in a tie for third place. I hope your entry receives more votes. The image compliments the poem very well.
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Howdy - my vote placed your contest submission in a tie for third place. I hope your entry receives more votes. The image compliments the poem very well.
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the review and stars. Wishing you all the best for the new year, j
Comment from tempeste
Ciao My poet.. you have three votes now!
I do love Greek and Roman mythology
Yes I would not be surprised if Cupido runs out of arrows .. even love is going through tough times ..
There is an economical crisis and when there is money shortage at home, marriages , relationships get rocky ...
PS: Cupido as far as I know is male .. so I believe it should be :
On HIS love crusade !
Ciao!
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Ciao My poet.. you have three votes now!
I do love Greek and Roman mythology
Yes I would not be surprised if Cupido runs out of arrows .. even love is going through tough times ..
There is an economical crisis and when there is money shortage at home, marriages , relationships get rocky ...
PS: Cupido as far as I know is male .. so I believe it should be :
On HIS love crusade !
Ciao!
Comment Written 03-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 03-Jan-2021
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Ciao, thanks for the advice and stars. Of course our little cupido is a boy. I changed it. Wishing you all the best for the new year, cheers, j
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the presentation.
Not enough darts is a sad affair.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Hello, anonymous,
Great entry for the 5-7-5 Love Poem writing prompt contest. Good syllables count and connection between lines. I love the presentation.
Not enough darts is a sad affair.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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I buy them in bulk on Amazon haha. Even a travel set.
Thanks for the kind review,
mystery writer..
Comment from equestrik
Awe-i love the picture and your writing goes very well with it. Cupid still has 6 weeks to get more of those darts! Nicely written 5-7-5 for the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Awe-i love the picture and your writing goes very well with it. Cupid still has 6 weeks to get more of those darts! Nicely written 5-7-5 for the contest.
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Just warming up for Feb 14 haha. Thanks for the review,
all the best in the new year, cheers, j
Comment from zanya
So much is conveyed here in this short format about those with broken hearts and Cupid's efforts to heal that brokeness- if only Cupid had such arrows in his quiver !
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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So much is conveyed here in this short format about those with broken hearts and Cupid's efforts to heal that brokeness- if only Cupid had such arrows in his quiver !
Comment Written 01-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2021
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Thanks for the insightful review, yes more cupids and love arrows please.
Wish you all the best in the new year, cheers, j
