Still Thrilled
By your kiss I'm...10 total reviews
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Aaaaah... someone still in love after all these years... how wonderful!! ;) A perfect contest offering here with great rhythm for the reader to enjoy... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Aaaaah... someone still in love after all these years... how wonderful!! ;) A perfect contest offering here with great rhythm for the reader to enjoy... thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this very nice review, I'm always glad to hear from you. :)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A cleverly rhymed and metered write with the passion and joys of kissing and finding romance, I enjoyed this little flirtation and you won my vote, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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A cleverly rhymed and metered write with the passion and joys of kissing and finding romance, I enjoyed this little flirtation and you won my vote, love Dolly x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thanks for this wonderful review and for your vote...both are appreciated. :)
Comment from Anissha Blackwell1
"Still Thrilled" is spectacular writing from the heart. It is reminiscent of those that can relate to their first smooch. Your words were full of emotion and passion sent vibes from the page. The artwork color and description are so befitting to a light feather feel of a soft kiss upon the lips or a deep passion one after many years still feels the same as the first one experienced.
Anissha
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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"Still Thrilled" is spectacular writing from the heart. It is reminiscent of those that can relate to their first smooch. Your words were full of emotion and passion sent vibes from the page. The artwork color and description are so befitting to a light feather feel of a soft kiss upon the lips or a deep passion one after many years still feels the same as the first one experienced.
Anissha
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review and for taking time to read my poem. Happy new year to you. :)
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Still Thrilled', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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'Still Thrilled', is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. I look forward to seeing your next post. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for your kind words and wonderful review, it really means a lot to me. I hope you and your family have a very happy year ahead. :)
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You're very welcome.
God bless you, stay safe and Happy New
Year :)))
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the start I remember I use to feel the same way and my world would go around like your photo
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem, they are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the start I remember I use to feel the same way and my world would go around like your photo
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for taking time to read and review my poem...and for your gracious words. :)
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Your very welcome
take careful be safe.
Cookie
Comment from lancellot
This is very well made and I really enjoyed the sentiment behind each line. If only it could be this way.
Now every kiss, though years have passed,
to me feels just the same.
- This probably isn't true, but it is a joy to wish it was. Perhaps then many loves would last the test of time.
of heaven and earth I've found with you.
-suggest changing to: Heaven and Earth. they are names in this case.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This is very well made and I really enjoyed the sentiment behind each line. If only it could be this way.
Now every kiss, though years have passed,
to me feels just the same.
- This probably isn't true, but it is a joy to wish it was. Perhaps then many loves would last the test of time.
of heaven and earth I've found with you.
-suggest changing to: Heaven and Earth. they are names in this case.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this nice review and your good advice...I capitalized them. Thanks again for reading. :)
Comment from WriterHeather
This is such a beautiful entry for the kiss contest! Seriously I have chills! I love the passion here! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest. I believe you will do very well.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This is such a beautiful entry for the kiss contest! Seriously I have chills! I love the passion here! Excellent work! Good luck in the contest. I believe you will do very well.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for this wonderful review, it makes me happy. :)
Comment from Joanne Gill-Maddick
Beautifully written
Poem. Nice entry for the contest.even the kisses feather light given by you still make my night. Each kiss we share is filled with love. Are you an angel from above. Nicely done.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Beautifully written
Poem. Nice entry for the contest.even the kisses feather light given by you still make my night. Each kiss we share is filled with love. Are you an angel from above. Nicely done.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you so much for this great review...it's so nice to hear from you. :)
Comment from LisaMay
This is such a sweetly sensual poem of how kisses triggered a passionate and enduring union. Your intimacy is a strength in your relationship - you are both so lucky.
The rhyming is well done and the rhythm carries the poem along well. I found the words a little hard to read on such a dark blue background. Perhaps you could change it to a lighter shade so older eyes could read it without problem? Actually, something else I just thought of... blue is a cooler colour and your poem is so warm. Maybe the background colour could be a lighter tone of the orangey or purply colour in the picture?
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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This is such a sweetly sensual poem of how kisses triggered a passionate and enduring union. Your intimacy is a strength in your relationship - you are both so lucky.
The rhyming is well done and the rhythm carries the poem along well. I found the words a little hard to read on such a dark blue background. Perhaps you could change it to a lighter shade so older eyes could read it without problem? Actually, something else I just thought of... blue is a cooler colour and your poem is so warm. Maybe the background colour could be a lighter tone of the orangey or purply colour in the picture?
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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You are so right about the color. I changed it and hopefully it will be easier to read. Thank you so much for this nice review. :)
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I looked again and you have made a nice blushing colour choice. Thanks for the review nomination!
Comment from Earl Corp
I was going to enter this contest but I think I just read the winner. I wish I still had a six star rating left to give you. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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I was going to enter this contest but I think I just read the winner. I wish I still had a six star rating left to give you. Very nice job. Stay safe and stay healthy in the new year.
Comment Written 02-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 02-Jan-2021
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Thank you for being so kind. I hope you enter, I've been reading your poetry for awhile now and I admire your talent. Please stay safe and have a great new year. :)
