Final Cry
She betrayed him3 total reviews
Comment from Goodadvicechan
It is amazing with these six words, you can come out with a crime scene.
Words can do wonders and can be mission impossible. Our current politicians are good with words
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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It is amazing with these six words, you can come out with a crime scene.
Words can do wonders and can be mission impossible. Our current politicians are good with words
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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The trick with politicians is one must check what they call facts. Thanks for the read and encouraging review.
Comment from LisaMay
Attaboy! The usual American solution - get a gun. Good idea, though, to start the new year by getting rid of a faithless wife. She probably hated your stinky pipe and took up with a non-smoker.
You've certainly used all the words to graphic effect - loved this: "blew a smoky flower'.
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Attaboy! The usual American solution - get a gun. Good idea, though, to start the new year by getting rid of a faithless wife. She probably hated your stinky pipe and took up with a non-smoker.
You've certainly used all the words to graphic effect - loved this: "blew a smoky flower'.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Yeah, too about Americans and their fetish for guns. We need more gun control. You may be right about the pipe, but don't you think cigars are worse. Thanks for your read and feedback.
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As a non-smoker myself, the only smoke I enjoy is the fragrance of woodsmoke when I'm camping in some remote place of scenic beauty. No-one I know smokes; it's been years since I was around cigar or pipe smokers.
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I must agree. Campfire smoke is indeed a joy. As for the others, I agree they should be put out.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Certainly a strong image you've painted with your use of the words here... although perhaps a different formatting would make it flow a bit easier for the reader...? Great visual presentation with pic/words. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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Certainly a strong image you've painted with your use of the words here... although perhaps a different formatting would make it flow a bit easier for the reader...? Great visual presentation with pic/words. Thanx for sharing and best of luck at the polls! ;)
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 04-Jan-2021
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What would be a good suggestion for different format? I appreciate any help.
