Sojourner In A Finite Space
Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Mountain repose"Reflections on Spiritual Growth
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
I enjoyed your terset very much. It was nice to relax on that rock with you, by the mountains. The field of flowers all around, makes for a very pleasing place to be to smoke your pipe and enjoy some time alone. You used the six words so well. I enjoyed! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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I enjoyed your terset very much. It was nice to relax on that rock with you, by the mountains. The field of flowers all around, makes for a very pleasing place to be to smoke your pipe and enjoy some time alone. You used the six words so well. I enjoyed! Well done and good luck in the contest. :) Sandra
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Sandra, thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
'Mountain repose' is an extremely well written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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'Mountain repose' is an extremely well written and delightfully descriptive piece. Penned with craft and skill. It was a pleasure to both read and review this talented poet's work. Good luck with the contest!
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
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Smiling back!
Smiling back at you!
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Such a cute and enchanting poem: "
'twas good to spend some time alone, a wee cry
to begin the year, starting with a sigh.
knowing in the village friends are nearby..," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Such a cute and enchanting poem: "
'twas good to spend some time alone, a wee cry
to begin the year, starting with a sigh.
knowing in the village friends are nearby..," Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
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Iza, thank you.
Comment from Wendy G
This is a beautiful poem, celebrating the freedom to be rejuvenated by the peace and beauty of nature away from the pain and hype of city life. Very good wishes for the contest.
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This is a beautiful poem, celebrating the freedom to be rejuvenated by the peace and beauty of nature away from the pain and hype of city life. Very good wishes for the contest.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2021
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Wendy, thank you.
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hello anon, this is a lovely poem, beautifully expressed and does not sound at all contrived in order to include the contest words. Also written in mono-rhyme with a lovely accompanying picture. Good work - very well done. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Hello anon, this is a lovely poem, beautifully expressed and does not sound at all contrived in order to include the contest words. Also written in mono-rhyme with a lovely accompanying picture. Good work - very well done. Good Luck - regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you.
Comment from Miss Cookie Atkinson
I love the photo you choose to go with your poem not only are they beautiful they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start
Your words touch my soul and heart
What a way to start a new year
Cookie
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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I love the photo you choose to go with your poem not only are they beautiful they are a perfect match.
You captured my attention from the start
Your words touch my soul and heart
What a way to start a new year
Cookie
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Cookie, I appreciate your time spent reading and commenting on my poem.
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Your very welcome
Cookie
Comment from Goodadvicechan
The six words bring you to a peaceful mountain sitting on a rock. That is beautiful.
I do not like the ending to start a new year with a wee cry. This destroys "such a beautiful scenery". It may be more appropriate to "Cry loudly" expressing joy and welcoming the beginning of a new year. Just a thought.
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The six words bring you to a peaceful mountain sitting on a rock. That is beautiful.
I do not like the ending to start a new year with a wee cry. This destroys "such a beautiful scenery". It may be more appropriate to "Cry loudly" expressing joy and welcoming the beginning of a new year. Just a thought.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Well it seems in my reverie of writing this I tapped into a real present emotion of the death of a family member we had on New Years day. Tough to cry out in Joy welcoming a new year after 2020 and all that was lost. Good thought though.
Comment from Ann Market
This was a wonderful poem and clever use of the words in the writing prompt! The scene itself is lovely, but when you see that you were required to use specific words for the poem, it makes the work that much more impressive.
Wonderful poem, and good luck to you in the contest!
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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This was a wonderful poem and clever use of the words in the writing prompt! The scene itself is lovely, but when you see that you were required to use specific words for the poem, it makes the work that much more impressive.
Wonderful poem, and good luck to you in the contest!
Comment Written 05-Jan-2021
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Thank you very much!
Comment from l.raven
what a beautiful place this would be to live...
so very surreal...beauty of night and day...
I love your poem...and love your picture...
so very well written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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what a beautiful place this would be to live...
so very surreal...beauty of night and day...
I love your poem...and love your picture...
so very well written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
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Lina, thank you very much!
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you are soooo very welcome...love xxoo
Comment from Eternal Muse
It's an amazing poem. I give you a lot of credit of using the prescribed words, and make such a beauty out of the write. Excellent imagery, visuals and artwork.
This should do incredibly well in the contest, and I wish you luck in the booths.
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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It's an amazing poem. I give you a lot of credit of using the prescribed words, and make such a beauty out of the write. Excellent imagery, visuals and artwork.
This should do incredibly well in the contest, and I wish you luck in the booths.
Comment Written 04-Jan-2021
reply by the author on 05-Jan-2021
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Eternal Muse, thank you for this validation.
